1987brian 

member since 06/23/2009 | last login 10/26/2014

I work a boring 9 to 5 job in a factory in sunny Scotland. I finished writing my first feature script in 2009 but haven't been active reading or writing screenplays much since then....

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I work a boring 9 to 5 job in a factory in sunny Scotland. I finished writing my first feature script in 2009 but haven't been active reading or writing screenplays much since then.

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Reviews by 1987brian 13

  • A review of Artificial
    by 1987brian on 10/17/2014
    Hi, your script looks very polished, very well written and easy to read, even though I don't know much about the God Particle and such. There's always room for a good sci-fi and I could definitely see this type of story on the big screen. I liked your main character(s) Lou/Jack but couldn't buy his relationship with Scarlet. She seemed to come out of nowhere and wasn't really... read
  • A review of Goddess
    by 1987brian on 10/16/2014
    Hi. I haven't read a feature screenplay in quite some time so bear with me. There is a lot to like about this, but I feel you could have got more from some scenes. More on that later. The writing was excellent. I noticed a few mistakes, but I was reading on my phone so I couldn't take note, but nothing major. It was a very quick read, even the final battle was a breeze to... read
  • by 1987brian on 07/05/2009
    This was an interesting little fantasy script and although itís aimed at kids, I still found it cute in a way. I donít think thereís much of a story or adventure going on for this to work as a full length feature film in a cinema, but for me it would definitely work as a special on a kids channel on a Saturday morning. I donít know which you were aiming for. Well, the story... read
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Comments About 1987brian 5

  • Daydreamer74 on 10/27/2014

    Brian

    Thank you for taking time to read and review GODDESS. I would've thanked you sooner but I've been occupied with moving.

    A concern for us with the script is what is and isn't clear. Your notes will help with that.

    Thanks again
    Mike
  • CJ Knight on 07/05/2009

    Hi Brian,

    Many thanks for your review of HUDSON FALLS. It was more pleasant to read than other reviews I'll take on board all your comments for the next draft.

    Kind regards
    CJ
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/03/2009

    Hi! First of all, thanks for your review, there's some insightful points there that I'll definitely give some thought to. But a friendly piece of advice, from one User to another. As a rule, it's generally not a good idea to mention and denigrate other specific screenplays in another review. You didn't quite do it this time, but just keep that in mind in the future.

    Anyway, aside from all that, I'm glad you liked my screenplay!
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