1987brian 

member since 06/23/2009 | last login 07/12/2012

I work a boring 9 to 5 job in a factory in sunny Scotland. It has never been a lifetime ambition of mine to write screenplays or be involved with movies of any kind actually, that has only just happened over the...

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I work a boring 9 to 5 job in a factory in sunny Scotland. It has never been a lifetime ambition of mine to write screenplays or be involved with movies of any kind actually, that has only just happened over the past year. I write because I know I can do better than the rubbish that gets produced nowadays. I've learned all the formatting rules, now for the writing. I've written one complete script so far.

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Reviews by 1987brian 11

  • by 1987brian on 07/05/2009
    This was an interesting little fantasy script and although itís aimed at kids, I still found it cute in a way. I donít think thereís much of a story or adventure going on for this to work as a full length feature film in a cinema, but for me it would definitely work as a special on a kids channel on a Saturday morning. I donít know which you were aiming for. Well, the story... read
  • A review of Hudson Falls
    by 1987brian on 07/04/2009
    Your writing is excellent, very professional, clear and straight to the point. No long paragraphs of needless information which made this a breeze to read through. Itís probably one of the quickest screenplays Iíve read. The story was fairly standard and nothing ground breaking but that can be said for nearly every slasher on the market nowadays. The most important thing,... read
  • A review of WhoShotWho (old Vers)
    by 1987brian on 07/02/2009
    This was an entertaining piece, it flowed well, enough action, plenty of humor. It does get confusing, well, for me at least but I did enjoy this for the most part. Thereís definitely a bit of Pulp Fiction in this! The action was handled perfectly. A great shoot-out at the end, but why were they firing at Darla? What did she do? Maybe I missed something. I also hoped you would... read
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Comments About 1987brian 4

  • CJ Knight on 07/05/2009

    Hi Brian,

    Many thanks for your review of HUDSON FALLS. It was more pleasant to read than other reviews I'll take on board all your comments for the next draft.

    Kind regards
    CJ
  • J. O'Hanley on 07/03/2009

    Hi! First of all, thanks for your review, there's some insightful points there that I'll definitely give some thought to. But a friendly piece of advice, from one User to another. As a rule, it's generally not a good idea to mention and denigrate other specific screenplays in another review. You didn't quite do it this time, but just keep that in mind in the future.

    Anyway, aside from all that, I'm glad you liked my screenplay!
  • Proudo on 06/30/2009

    Thanks for the review of O'Briens, I appreciate your insightful and considered comments.

    Welcome to TS!

    Lee
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