BSKling
Who doesn't love talking about themselves? As writers we create other people to do it for us so we are never put on the spot ourselves. My name is Ben and I am a writer living in the midwest. I had dreams...
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Who doesn't love talking about themselves? As writers we create other people to do it for us so we are never put on the spot ourselves. My name is Ben and I am a writer living in the midwest. I had dreams of being the next Martin McDonagh but I realized we did not share the same style (or talent). My background in writing falls with theatre however I have written a few shorts here and there. I have a degree in acting which I aquired to better understand what a performer needs from a writer. Currently, I am employed by a wonderful company that makes computers and other electronics. However, if I mention their name I may no longer work there. I look forward to learning from all the writers of Trigger Street and maybe teaching a thing... or two... or three. Probably two.
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Reviews by BSKling 5
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A review of Hard Time Harveyby BSKling on 08/29/2012I have to say that I found "Hard Time Harvey" to be one of the moreau enjoyable scripts I've read on trigger street. Although I haven't reviewed a lot of them, I have read a lot. I would like to be picky with my notes as I believe your script is In a great place to get picky. I wish to preface my notes by saying they are just that... my notes. Take them for what they are, one... read -
A review of Ashlandby BSKling on 07/27/2011There are a lot of wonderful things going on in your script. In fact, I would say your talent lies in action. You have a fantastic ability to describe what we are seeing as an audience member. Since the script is still on paper you must give us the tools to properly imagine the setting, the people, the places, the action, etc. and you do that quite well. What surprises me about... read
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A review of Cody Dumas: Demon Hustlerby BSKling on 07/23/2011To begin, I found your script to be wonderfully entertaining. It was bright and quick and I never felt like I was reading multiple movies. You had a great sense of what "Demon Hustler." With that being said I believe there is more room to explore Cody. I would have liked to have seen a little more of the con-man in the beginning. Seeing more of Cody's redeemable qualities would... read
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Thanks for the kind review and thoughtful notes!
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Thank you for your review. Especially your comment about making the butler and the gardener more separate with their demeanor, I can understand that as a problem now that I think about it.
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+ more commentsMichael Keller on 08/29/2012
Karl Gorman on 08/29/2012
It was initially a play, which would be why it read like a short story with its interior monologues. I will give that a heavy consideration too.
Thanks again, may Triggerstreet pave great avenues for you.
-- Karl.
love32 on 09/07/2011