BSKling 

member since 07/20/2011 | last login 08/29/2012

Who doesn't love talking about themselves? As writers we create other people to do it for us so we are never put on the spot ourselves. My name is Ben and I am a writer living in the midwest. I had dreams...

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Who doesn't love talking about themselves? As writers we create other people to do it for us so we are never put on the spot ourselves. My name is Ben and I am a writer living in the midwest. I had dreams of being the next Martin McDonagh but I realized we did not share the same style (or talent). My background in writing falls with theatre however I have written a few shorts here and there. I have a degree in acting which I aquired to better understand what a performer needs from a writer. Currently, I am employed by a wonderful company that makes computers and other electronics. However, if I mention their name I may no longer work there. I look forward to learning from all the writers of Trigger Street and maybe teaching a thing... or two... or three. Probably two.

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Reviews by BSKling 5

  • A review of Hard Time Harvey
    by BSKling on 08/29/2012
    I have to say that I found "Hard Time Harvey" to be one of the moreau enjoyable scripts I've read on trigger street. Although I haven't reviewed a lot of them, I have read a lot. I would like to be picky with my notes as I believe your script is In a great place to get picky. I wish to preface my notes by saying they are just that... my notes. Take them for what they are, one... read
  • by BSKling on 07/23/2011
    To begin, I found your script to be wonderfully entertaining. It was bright and quick and I never felt like I was reading multiple movies. You had a great sense of what "Demon Hustler." With that being said I believe there is more room to explore Cody. I would have liked to have seen a little more of the con-man in the beginning. Seeing more of Cody's redeemable qualities would... read
  • A review of The Carved Pumpkin
    by BSKling on 07/20/2011
    I was intrigued from start to finish. So often do shorts feel as though they must give a full story complete with background information and explanation. With your film you delivered trust. Trust that your audience would use their imagination to guess what was next. I found myself trying to anticipate each movement or wave of motion as your piece progressed and was not capable... read

Comments About BSKling 5

  • Michael Keller on 08/29/2012

    Thanks for the kind review and thoughtful notes!
  • Karl Gorman on 08/29/2012

    Thank you for your review. Especially your comment about making the butler and the gardener more separate with their demeanor, I can understand that as a problem now that I think about it.

    It was initially a play, which would be why it read like a short story with its interior monologues. I will give that a heavy consideration too.

    Thanks again, may Triggerstreet pave great avenues for you.

    -- Karl.
  • love32 on 09/07/2011

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