Brunetm 

member since 10/24/2011 | last login 02/29/2012

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Reviews by Brunetm 6

  • Brunetm
    Well written Credited Review
    A review of The Song (2)
    by Brunetm on 02/26/2012
    The story was very well written. I found myself in the beggining confused by who the main character was. I assume some mythological creature. A half human half fish type creature. I know the character was on a journey to find herself. The changes that took place could of been spiritual or even natural. Such as the chaotic behaviors of Earth such as a volcanic erupition and... read
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    Sometimes Love is what people need. Credited Review
    A review of Beginning Change
    by Brunetm on 02/26/2012
    It is hard to think about what this person went through in the early years of her life. It shows that the business of taking care of children neglects what children need the most and that is love. If it wasn't for the love your friend Nikki had for you, who knows what the outcome of you life would of been. It is the love that you got from your best friend and your friends and... read
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    Powerful Message Non Credited Review
    A review of From Darkness, Light
    by Brunetm on 02/26/2012
    People too often overlook or are unwilling to accept certain truths in life. While things have gotten better they still are not where they should be. The use of the dark screen during the film really expresses the message. People need to open their eyes to the darkness of the world of the unwillingess for people to accept.
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  • f-ceska
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    f-ceska on 02/27/2012

    Hi and thank you for your review of 'The Song'. This is the second version - the first was even more vague. I thought I had left enough clues in the story this time to help readers, but obviously not. I did mention the concept in the 'more info' notes if you are curious.
    But I'm glad you enjoyed the writing anyway.
    Good luck with yours,
    Francesca
  • gulfcoastomega
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    gulfcoastomega on 02/04/2012

    Hey B.

    Thank you for taking the time to review my story. You are the only reviewer who 'got it' that it was his heavy metal girlfriend coming to save him (she just didn't get there before the story ended)

    Best of luck going forward,
    -Glen
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    vieira4 on 02/02/2012

    Hey, thanks for the review. I know my stories can be hard to follow, because I write very fast. Also, I don't think my brain works like most people's, so my stream-of-consciousness writing is a mystery to others! I'm guessing you worked out the star's identity before you finished. I'm kind of hoping that some people will do that and others won't, and I guess if you do, it is predictable. Thanks again!

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