Cheyenne30 

member since 11/27/2011 | last login 09/02/2012

I am a college student with a minor in Creative Writing. I enjoy writing as an escape from the every day stress of my busy life. I am in a serious relationship with a wonderful guy. I have always enjoyed writing and...

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I am a college student with a minor in Creative Writing. I enjoy writing as an escape from the every day stress of my busy life. I am in a serious relationship with a wonderful guy. I have always enjoyed writing and am looking forward to being published one day. I like to write non-fiction more than I do fiction but tend to do both at times.

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Reviews by Cheyenne30 18

  • by Cheyenne30 on 09/02/2012
    I started reading this and realized that it sound way too much like an advertisement for a book instead of something profound. I was expecting some illustrations of each book but instead found that I was being 'told' what was in it then 'seeing' what was in it. The concept is wonderful and I give you kudos for that but over all this story was simply boring to me. There was... read
  • by Cheyenne30 on 04/24/2012
    This story is well written. I found a few mechanical and grammar errors in this writing. What is the conflict of this story? I feel that it surrounds the concept of needing a drug fix. Other than that I donít see a central theme. I like how you describe the setting. The details are clear and concise. The beginning draws the reader in by describing how he interacts with the... read
  • A review of The Testament
    by Cheyenne30 on 04/23/2012
    Reading the story The Testament I could find myself remembering the times that I have struggled with my faith. I did not understand how it was so easy for her to turn herself over to a liar and a cheat like Satan when she had a strong relationship with Christ. I would have like to see more of a struggle with her faith before her decision to turn to Satan. What did Christ do... read
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Comments About Cheyenne30 10

  • mmckean on 07/21/2013

    I hope you keep writing. Im probably going to give up on it myself. One of my friends just published a book so I already lost the race. Anything I write now will just be secondary to his greatness
  • mmckean on 12/24/2012

    Merry Christmas :)
  • mmckean on 11/21/2012

    Your writing is terrible! You need to take some writing courses.
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