Rememberance of lessons learned
I am a college student with a minor in Creative Writing. I enjoy writing as an escape from the every day stress of my busy life. I am in a serious relationship with a wonderful guy. I have always enjoyed writing and...
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I am a college student with a minor in Creative Writing. I enjoy writing as an escape from the every day stress of my busy life. I am in a serious relationship with a wonderful guy. I have always enjoyed writing and am looking forward to being published one day. I like to write non-fiction more than I do fiction but tend to do both at times.
Submissions by Cheyenne30
Reviews by Cheyenne30 18
A review of The Purest Form of Virginityby Cheyenne30 on 04/24/2012This story is well written. I found a few mechanical and grammar errors in this writing. What is the conflict of this story? I feel that it surrounds the concept of needing a drug fix. Other than that I donít see a central theme. I like how you describe the setting. The details are clear and concise. The beginning draws the reader in by describing how he interacts with the... read
A review of The Testamentby Cheyenne30 on 04/23/2012Reading the story The Testament I could find myself remembering the times that I have struggled with my faith. I did not understand how it was so easy for her to turn herself over to a liar and a cheat like Satan when she had a strong relationship with Christ. I would have like to see more of a struggle with her faith before her decision to turn to Satan. What did Christ do... read
A review of Night Movesby Cheyenne30 on 04/23/2012Reading the story Night Moves I could find myself remembering the days of youth. I also felt that I was in the story! I loved the setting of it being in Vietnam with the flashback to when he was relatively young. I enjoyed getting to know the main character. I would like to see you increase the information about whether or not he dies. If he doesnít die then what happens to... read