When she woke, she was naked, naked and wet with sweat...
I'm short, my eyes are too close together, and, when I stand up quickly, my knees pop really loud. I'm terrible at love, sports, and beer pong, and I'm obssessed with the off-brand of 'Hot Cheetos' - 'Hot Fries'. To top it...
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I'm short, my eyes are too close together, and, when I stand up quickly, my knees pop really loud. I'm terrible at love, sports, and beer pong, and I'm obssessed with the off-brand of 'Hot Cheetos' - 'Hot Fries'. To top it all off, I suffer from a lovely, malevolent curse - I'm convinced I'm a writer. So, I guess we'll see just how steep the stars are stacked against me. Keep the pen moving!
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A review of Susan's Storyby Schism83 on 06/09/2013Hey, Morris! Just read "Susan's Story" and here are my thoughts and comments. This is a good read. While there are elements at play that are commonplace and border cliche, you handle them in a very sincere and honest way which lends a fresh quality and intrique to the overall narrative. You have some great physical description and also some really good, very human moments... read
A review of The Old Man's Paintingby Schism83 on 05/27/2013Hey, Filmfam. Just read 'The Old Man's Painting' and here are my thoughts. I thought this was a really nice story, but it just didn't work for me. It was too quaint and 'feel-good' for my taste. The dialogue felt unrealistic, the narrator's thoughts and habits repetitive, and the overall story glossy and overtly sappy. While I didn't like it, though, I decided to review... read
A review of The Flyoverby Schism83 on 05/27/2013Hey, Morris. Just read 'The Flyover' and here are my thoughts and comments. This is a very quick, easy read. Your voice is simple and straighforward, and you don't bother with too much description or poetic license, which is consistent with the style, voice, and general nature of the piece. Your story is good, but I have a problem with the protag suddenly killing Gareth... read