Kimo(James), a young Hawaiian boy, seeks to fill his new facination with bears, and sets out to find some.
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A review of Lucidityby Unknownwriter9 on 12/26/2011I was assigned your screen play "Lucidity." I liked it as an overall work. I have a suggestion, that you go with the spiritual medicine, and spiritual journey, with the twist of the dark ages thrown in due to the tourtue he's put himself through. You never finished with the "Computer Program," scenerio so to change it would be easy, some of your dialogue is simplistic, (I just... read
A review of The Ferryby Unknownwriter9 on 12/18/2011The Ferry,a nightmare I hope I neve have. I loved the twist ending, of how the whole day was just a last memory. It reminded me of a story I seen on film of a civil war P.O.W. being hanged, and it was a last thought kind of story. It was very well done, and had now misspelled words that I found, the format was good, and as I mentioned the conecept was great. I enjoyed this... read
A review of Croatoaby Unknownwriter9 on 12/15/2011Croatoa, was an excellent concept for a screenplay. I had no problem reading or beliving the characters dialogue in this historical drama. I did have one concern: Towards the end, why is the native boy taken? what happens to him, it's really left open. AND how did the Governor get such detailed info, sleeping arrangements, father's fishing schedule, mother's schedule... read