A.Tarkovsky 

member since 02/04/2011 | last login 02/17/2014

Feel free to write any kind of comment on my screenplays. I prefer not only technically, but also showing me emotions and thoughts that arised while reading. I hope some day only one of my messages addressed to all of you will...

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Feel free to write any kind of comment on my screenplays. I prefer not only technically, but also showing me emotions and thoughts that arised while reading. I hope some day only one of my messages addressed to all of you will reach somebody.

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Reviews by A.Tarkovsky 39

  • A review of Peter
    by A.Tarkovsky on 03/17/2011
    I saw your short story as interpretation of what could have been going on inside one of the Apostles - Peter. How was life back then and what he could have had in mind before and after his "adventures" with Christ and other Apostles. It was a very interesting read, one of that kind that get you thinking about what actually character wanted to say. I like your idea, the way... read
  • A review of Fleas
    by A.Tarkovsky on 03/17/2011
    Great story. It felt like it's Alice in Wonderland on steroids. :) Weird and disturbing in a way but pleasable. Very fictional. I liked it. Oh, not to forget... about her dilemma, was she dreaming or all that was real, i think it was a dream, as i always wake up knowing i had to remember few things but no matter how much i try there's no way to do that, i think that hapenned... read
  • by A.Tarkovsky on 03/17/2011
    Very interesting fusion of fantasy and western. It works great, reads quickly, and it's fun and interesting all the way. Technicalities: Concept and story. Both are very well, concept was good and left space for story to evolve in numerous ways. I like how you let story go some specific ways not seen too much before. At least part of the story, the other part was predictive,... read
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Comments About A.Tarkovsky 23

  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 03/25/2012

    About a year ago you reviewed a screenplay submission of mine called "the Child catcher". In that time and on the basis of yours and others reviews, I have given it a much needed reworking. I would be much obliged if you would consider giving it a reread and another review if you have the time to do so. Best regards.

    Undetheradar.

    http://labs.triggerstreet.com/screenplay/the-child-catcher#synopsis
  • feelcinty on 11/15/2011

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  • capper on 03/19/2011

    Hi

    Thanks for pointing a couple spots out for me to look at. I agree with you on the "no shit Sherlock bit"scene and changed it slightly, but the "crap shot bit" was meant to go down that way, so I left that one in.

    Thanks again for taking the time to read and review Monster Mash.

    Daniel
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