aahutchinson 

member since 09/01/2004 | last login 10/23/2005

Angela has written three feature screenplays, one TV spec and two children's picture books. She is recipent of an International Poet of Merit Award and a former Miss Teen Illinois Finalist. In Angela's leisure time, she enjoys rollerblading, mentoring youth at her...

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Angela has written three feature screenplays, one TV spec and two children's picture books. She is recipent of an International Poet of Merit Award and a former Miss Teen Illinois Finalist. In Angela's leisure time, she enjoys rollerblading, mentoring youth at her church and playing badminton with her husband Arthur.

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Reviews by aahutchinson 33

  • A review of The Fisherman's Ring
    by aahutchinson on 10/14/2005
    When I read the synopsis, I knew this would be an interesting screenplay. I thought hte timing of the script was done well. It was a fast read for the type of story. Very tight script. Shombay had a distinct voice and was likeable. Characters were thought out. You can remove all your CUT TOs. They are not necessary and also some of the dialogue was a little on the nose... read
  • A review of Poetry of Survival
    by aahutchinson on 04/29/2005
    Overall, the story is an interesting idea. The way it was executed though made the story very confusing. The writing was okay, but I had problems with some minor things, Im very detail-orientated. Also, there were so many characters. It was hard for me to follow who was who, especially in the beginning. Your characters are a little talky. They often have very long lines... read
  • A review of Fly Third Revision
    by aahutchinson on 04/28/2005
    The first thing I noticed was that you write very long descriptions in your action lines. Ive heard a good rule of thumb is no more than 4 lines. So you should try shortening or breaking some of your lines up. In the first 20 pages nothing was really happening. I also found a lot of the cursing so unnecessary. And the drugs, I read your production notes, but just because... read
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