Adolpho Rios 

member since 08/06/2008 | last login 01/07/2010

For now, I am writing about true first hand accounts. I am a big fan of Elmore Leonard but am not ready to write any fiction,yet. We recently lost a literary icon of American culture, Hunter S. Thompson. I would like to...

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For now, I am writing about true first hand accounts. I am a big fan of Elmore Leonard but am not ready to write any fiction,yet. We recently lost a literary icon of American culture, Hunter S. Thompson. I would like to emulate his style but as they say, "you have to learn to walk before you can run". I figure I'll cut my teeth on what I know best and improve the technique as I go along. My third story is as close to fiction as I have got. It is a fictional monologue from a Charles Agster, who is no longer with us.I just hope readers find my stories interesting and somewhat entertaining.

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Reviews by Adolpho Rios 15

  • by Adolpho Rios on 09/16/2008
    This story was okay, but I was wondering where it was going. There were a lot of interesting glimpses into what was going on but it was not to clear or focused. Maybe it was meant to be that way. It is a different style of writing to be sure. It was more of a collage of characters, world issues, music, rappers, and meanwhile some event going on in the background. Oh, and let's... read
  • A review of Ghost Chasing
    by Adolpho Rios on 09/13/2008
    Yea, I liked this story. It was kind of like a little mystery that made you wonder if the girl was real or not. The main character was well formed in that I could tell that this was a younger crowd's type of read. What was also interesting was the way the protaganist sluethed his way into finding out where the girl lived. Finally, at the end, he is standing in front of her... read
  • A review of Trauma (REV)
    by Adolpho Rios on 09/04/2008
    I enjoyed this one. Some of the grammer could have been cleaned up, maybe a little more correctness or punctuation. I realize that the english language is always changing and different styles of writing are beginning to be more acceptable, but there ar certain rules that should be adhered to. Oh yeah, and maybe a little bit more complete sentences. If they are not complete,... read
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Comments About Adolpho Rios 7

  • WildIrishRose on 09/16/2008

    Many thanks for your very possitive review of

    STRENGTH OF A WOMAN

    I am so glad that it has struck a cord with you.

    Your comments are well received and very helpful indeed on how to make the story better and I do so thank you for those

    All the best

    Happy writing

    Caroline
  • WildIrishRose on 09/09/2008

    Many thanks for your review of

    STRENGTH OF A WOMAN - The Realisation

    The story forms part of a series about this woman if you would like to follow it. You will see the order its uploaded in my submissions. I think that you would really enjoy the first story in the set. its only 1800 words if you care to have a look.

    I'm so glad that you got the point so well and you certainly encourage me to write more.

    I'm a children's writer breaking in to the adult market so am not familiar with all of the set requirements etc yet so your comments on that are very appreciated.

    Again thnak you and so glad you enjoyed it

    Caroline
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/30/2008

    Thanks for the time and effort you gave to read and review The Hill Wife. I appreciate your generous comments a great deal. I hope your day and evening are equally pleasant. Tom
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