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by alexseaborne on 01/18/2007

I at first would like to say that this was very well written and another lesson in history that should never be forgotten, this story in itself is along the lines of tradgedies like rosewood for example, which are good stories and great educational tools but for me its just to sad... I think that there where a few parts especially when the womens group and the pastor were... read

Broken but fixable

A review of Indestructible

by alexseaborne on 01/15/2007

Ok, I thought that the idea of this was good, it has the outline to be intriguing and entertaining, the problem for me was that there was a jumbled mess in the middle... I also was dissapointed in the ending, I don't know if I just missed it but who was the inmate and what was his purpose? It left me feeling like, I just didn't get it... I think you did really well esthablishing... read

beautiful

A review of Father Max Rev. 2

by alexseaborne on 12/27/2006

I thought that this was written beautifully. I am big on events that happened in history like the holocaust and I really enjoyed the fact that this was about the other individuals that lost their lives not to take away from any one elses struggles but this really touched me.I thought the structure was well thought out and that the story developed and unfolded well, for a moment... read

innocent as charged

A review of Guilty Prey

by alexseaborne on 12/05/2006

I think you're right in your production notes something is missing. I've thought about it for a couple of days now and I'm at a lost for words the story is good it's new twist on vampires that you usually don't see but the thing that sells vampires is their darkness which you have in here but I think you tried in away to stay away from it but I think you should grab it and... read

Soho

A review of Soho Noir

by alexseaborne on 11/12/2006

This has potential, a few things that distracted me where the brit refrences not everyone is worldly and I have only seen two of the ones you mentioned so its hard to pull from their refrences if you've never seen them. Ok I thought you did a great job on Sean you really feel for the guy, gee us women can be so mean, but their situation was so real I enjoyed that. The story... read

intresting

A review of guests

by alexseaborne on 11/12/2006

Ok, the idea of this script is interesting but I couldn't see this as a film there is nothing to compell you to keep reading the only people who transfer where Darren and Karen, though all the things that happened in the room where chilling they where all individual stories. There needs to be more if Eugene is the focal poin he should be more involved he shouled see more he... read

Not again

A review of REUNION

by alexseaborne on 10/16/2006

I hated the ending skeleton key two I was all for this until I got to the ending it just blew it for me I would have rather seen the kids get to go back to when they we're ten eleven and twelve and get to have there lives back that makes it for me, but other than that the structure was good it read well, it's a great story it starts fast and I like how we keep finding things... read

Funny!!

A review of IMAGINARY FRIENDS

by alexseaborne on 10/11/2006

This is a cool new version of Monsters Inc. i thought that the funny parts were funny, I think there could be more Adult humor I know the audience is geared towards CHildren but you've got to keep the adults entertained also. But I thought it was good taking all the fears and showing how to overcome them my favorite part had to be the peek a boos that was hilarious. I think... read

timeless

A review of The Alien Diaries (rv 4)

by alexseaborne on 09/29/2006

At first I was little bit weary about this but as the story evolves so do my feelings i thought overall it was very good the only thing really that bothered me was how maddy spoke it just annoyed me i couldn't tell if she really speaks like that or if she was just doing it for her job. Secondly I thought brontes character was key besides e.t. i don't think there are any other... read

Ingents... cool

A review of Tales from Atom City

by alexseaborne on 09/25/2006

I thought this was a good read I couldn't put it down very suspensful I loved the way you spaced everything out so that you didn't find out too much or too little this is the first one I've read that I've actually liked the ending the only thing I thought that could have been brought out a little bit more is Ari's struggles maybe when he sleeps make his flashbacks a little... read

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