alexsinesi 

member since 05/20/2011 | last login 11/11/2011

I've been making up stories for as long as I can remember....

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I've been making up stories for as long as I can remember.

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Reviews by alexsinesi 33

  • by alexsinesi on 07/10/2011
    You have a really awesome concept here, it reminded me in the best possible way of Percy Jackson and other YA fantasy material. This universe definitely has franchise potential. The script itself though, could use another thorough polish. It was a bit of a tough read -- description, whether it was in action or dialogue scenes, felt overwritten and generally slowed the pace... read
  • A review of EARTHSHAKERS
    by alexsinesi on 07/07/2011
    This was the most original script I've read on Triggerstreet so far -- a fantastic concept, an awesome piece of sci-fi, and most surprisingly of all, a moving story. Here are a few suggestions should you choose to make another draft, just some broad ideas that you can of course take or leave, but I think they would take the script to the next level, and maybe even give it a... read
  • A review of The Current
    by alexsinesi on 07/06/2011
    This is an exceedingly well-written script. It's always refreshing to find a few lyrical touches worked into a script's action lines, and they don't for a minute detract from your excellent pacing. As you get into the second act, this becomes an incredibly brutal torture-fest, and I admired its uncompromising vision throughout, although I think it shares a general weakness... read
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Comments About alexsinesi 30

  • Braxcugs on 07/10/2013

    Thanks for your great Cupid Walsh review. I'm sorry for being so late but I saw it only today :-(

    Thanks again!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • elysiumfilms on 07/24/2011

    Thank you for your review of the new version of Island of the Devil - it's always a work in progress and there is many many versions left to do.

    A lot of people say they dislike Hopkins because he leaves Molly behind - so I am now thinking of having Babo putting him into some chokerhold to shut up.

    What did you think of him leaving her behind?
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/22/2011

    Thank you for your review of Didier.

    It was, largely, a cosmetic change draft. The next one will be bigger, I promise. I just wanted to see if I could wrap up the narrator.

    Thanks again. I appreciate your help.
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