Brian W 

member since 01/17/2005 | last login 03/28/2013

While still writing the scripts and plays, I have really turned to prose. With prose there is only one producer, director and performer. That's me. My promise to myself is to create prose, that while being strange or off the beaten path...

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While still writing the scripts and plays, I have really turned to prose. With prose there is only one producer, director and performer. That's me. My promise to myself is to create prose, that while being strange or off the beaten path will be of the philosophy of clear, concise and crisp. I will not have flowery run-ons, self important sentences that take away from the forward momentum of story. I want you all to hold me to that promise.

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Reviews by Brian W 51

  • by Brian W on 09/29/2007
    nice use of an allegory, an animal that is completely unique to describe the life of an art student, after art school. Even though the piece takes on the fictitious manticore as its hero, there is an open eyed clarity to it, a sincerity that probably rests in the biographical. Would have preferred a more straight-forward story, something about the Manticore doing something,... read
  • by Brian W on 09/27/2007
    some other key descriptors are necessary here but they escape me at the moment. I would prefer you didn't start the story telling me it's a dream. Maybe don't do a reveal at the end either. It's absurd and fun. Really separate dialogue and paragraph better. It hurts my eyes done the way you did it. Just make it look better and they will come. Fun-weird-pretty good. I've... read
  • A review of The Vegetarian
    by Brian W on 09/27/2007
    -but not the way to tell his story. I fear that you may want to go back and really revise the character, because to the casual reader, the reveal does not make much sense. We cannot infer clues of who he is, and there is so much left hanging that we cannot fully understand what he is. I'm interested in what makes a man do this, but his walking through desert thing doesn't... read
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Comments About Brian W 12

  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/30/2008

    Barry's Last Breakfast...

    Good tale...

    Re: My review title...
    What I resented...the villain was an artist.
    And he wasn't mean enough!!!!!
    Bwah-HAHAHAHAHHHHAAAAAAAA!!!!!
    Not really kidding...known some people who claim to be artists who are rottener-that a word?-than a year old potato...and do you like Anne Rice?

    Da Dragon is leaving...

    TTFN- and looking forward to getting anuddah wolfish story to review...

    I hear the spell checker has hired some goons to get me...
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/26/2008

    Yo, yo, YO! Dragon in da HOUSE!!!!

    I just reviewed Our Danse Macabre...you wrote it too good!
    Send me MORE! Bwah-hahahahahaha!!!!

    ZZZEEEEEEE-Beee-YOOOOWWWWWW!!!!
    Dragon just took off...

    Sping! Wheeeee.....BOOM!

    He's gone....
  • Eulalio on 10/08/2007

    Hey Brian

    How are you?

    Thanks a lot for the review of my short story 'A Night Wasted'.
    I really appreciate it

    Take Care
    David
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