That horrible, turn comes over him in the moonlight. He must make a moral choice.
While still writing the scripts and plays, I have really turned to prose. With prose there is only one producer, director and performer. That's me. My promise to myself is to create prose, that while being strange or off the beaten path...
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While still writing the scripts and plays, I have really turned to prose. With prose there is only one producer, director and performer. That's me. My promise to myself is to create prose, that while being strange or off the beaten path will be of the philosophy of clear, concise and crisp. I will not have flowery run-ons, self important sentences that take away from the forward momentum of story. I want you all to hold me to that promise.
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Reviews by Brian W 51
A review of The Concise Biography of the Manticoreby Brian W on 09/29/2007nice use of an allegory, an animal that is completely unique to describe the life of an art student, after art school. Even though the piece takes on the fictitious manticore as its hero, there is an open eyed clarity to it, a sincerity that probably rests in the biographical. Would have preferred a more straight-forward story, something about the Manticore doing something,... read
A review of The Down and Out Dinerby Brian W on 09/27/2007some other key descriptors are necessary here but they escape me at the moment. I would prefer you didn't start the story telling me it's a dream. Maybe don't do a reveal at the end either. It's absurd and fun. Really separate dialogue and paragraph better. It hurts my eyes done the way you did it. Just make it look better and they will come. Fun-weird-pretty good. I've... read
A review of The Vegetarianby Brian W on 09/27/2007-but not the way to tell his story. I fear that you may want to go back and really revise the character, because to the casual reader, the reveal does not make much sense. We cannot infer clues of who he is, and there is so much left hanging that we cannot fully understand what he is. I'm interested in what makes a man do this, but his walking through desert thing doesn't... read