Bud R 

member since 01/21/2008 | last login 08/22/2010

I am 20, Vegan, play music and listen to it a lot. I have done some copy work and editing in prior jobs....

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I am 20, Vegan, play music and listen to it a lot. I have done some copy work and editing in prior jobs.

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Reviews by Bud R 7

  • Bud R
    Corny Stalk Credited Review
    A review of Ghost Chasing
    by Bud R on 10/21/2008
    All in all, not bad. Though I have to admit I believe you would make a better poet than writer. Many times, I am not sure of the intention, you brought a rhyme scheme into the mix. The story itself was an easy read but almost seemed to unravel itself. Charlie devolves as the story progresses. He goes from a rich interesting aristocrat to a poor boring oaf. Perhaps... read
  • Bud R
    Twinkle Twinkle... Credited Review
    A review of Orion's Witch
    by Bud R on 04/25/2008
    Let me start off by saying that this story was very interesting. Unfortunately the coherency was not quite up to par. With the addition of 2-3 more pages of detail it could be great. At several points the writing almost seemed rushed, as if you had very limited space to give key factors . My only gripe is that the characters appeared to me slightly under developed. For... read
  • Bud R
    Or Narnia... Credited Review
    A review of I Chanced Upon a Faun
    by Bud R on 01/27/2008
    This story was not one that I would ask for anyone to read. As a whole the story was lacking. The characters were underdeveloped and the plot was mysteriously missing. There was no actual flow to the story either. The word choice was repetitive, inventive and lack-luster. The punctuation was, at times, very upsetting. What ruined the story most for me though was the toggling... read

Comments About Bud R 4

  • WildIrishRose
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    WildIrishRose on 10/22/2008

    Welcome bud and thanks for your review of

    BETRAYAL OF TRUST

    I am delighted that you enjoyed it and thanks so much for all of your comments which are very useful indeed.

    The story is part of a collection about this woman's life so if you wanted you could read more on different aspects as they get assigned to you.

    Hope you will stick with the collection which is gathering a little following on TS

    All the best

    Caroline

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    **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 01/27/2008

    Thank you for taking the time to review True Love, and for your kind comments.

    MJ
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    **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 01/26/2008

    Welcome to Triggerstreet! Hope you find this site to be as inspiring and beneficial as I have!

    Best of luck!

    Jason
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