CarlaC
member since 01/25/2006 |
last login 02/09/2013
Be not the slave of your own past. Plunge into the sublime seas, dive deep and swim far, so you shall come back with self-respect, with new power, with an advanced experience that shall explain and overlook the old. Ralp Waldo Emerson...
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Be not the slave of your own past. Plunge into the sublime seas, dive deep and swim far, so you shall come back with self-respect, with new power, with an advanced experience that shall explain and overlook the old. Ralp Waldo Emerson
Submissions by CarlaC
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Reviews by CarlaC 14
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A review of The Yachtby CarlaC on 09/04/2009This story was very well written. I was caught up in the story right from the first sentence. The emotional seperation was portrayed in a very realistic way. I especially liked the paragraph about how they would eat to avoid spending time together. The British couple are too one dimensional. It would be nice if you could flesh them out a little more - they have an open... read
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A review of Good Americaby CarlaC on 04/15/2007I really liked this screenplay. It was an easy read, flowed well and I was so into the story, I couldn't beleive it when I got to the last page. I loved Hopper's Character. Suggestions: Pg. 22 you have put Radio for all of these in the slug line then you put (on phone) by roses dialogue, I think you meant to put radio here as well. Pg. 63 Sonny talks about Willie as the... read
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A review of The Towerby CarlaC on 04/08/2007Overall- I liked the story. It was funny at parts especially the scenes that took place at the Beyond The Third meetings. Some of the characters there were a hoot. Suggestions: First scenes in the hospital I feel are too long and full of redundancy, .ie. Ellie wanting Dorothy to stay and saying she doesn't have much time while Dorothy argues with her. I think the dialouge... read
Comments About CarlaC 14
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Hey, how are you over here?
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Likewise Carla and thanks. That's sooo cool. Well done!
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Thanks -- the same to you!
+ more commentsjwest on 08/26/2008
What are you writing on? Hope all well with you and yours, Carla.
; )
jwest on 07/02/2008
Yay to you!
:)
micmacmoviemaker on 07/02/2008
:)
Why haven't you ever posted your script here on TS?