CarlaC 

member since 01/25/2006 | last login 02/22/2014

Be not the slave of your own past. Plunge into the sublime seas, dive deep and swim far, so you shall come back with self-respect, with new power, with an advanced experience that shall explain and overlook the old. Ralp Waldo Emerson...

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Be not the slave of your own past. Plunge into the sublime seas, dive deep and swim far, so you shall come back with self-respect, with new power, with an advanced experience that shall explain and overlook the old. Ralp Waldo Emerson

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Reviews by CarlaC 14

  • A review of The Yacht
    by CarlaC on 09/04/2009
    This story was very well written. I was caught up in the story right from the first sentence. The emotional seperation was portrayed in a very realistic way. I especially liked the paragraph about how they would eat to avoid spending time together. The British couple are too one dimensional. It would be nice if you could flesh them out a little more - they have an open... read
  • A review of Good America
    by CarlaC on 04/15/2007
    I really liked this screenplay. It was an easy read, flowed well and I was so into the story, I couldn't beleive it when I got to the last page. I loved Hopper's Character. Suggestions: Pg. 22 you have put Radio for all of these in the slug line then you put (on phone) by roses dialogue, I think you meant to put radio here as well. Pg. 63 Sonny talks about Willie as the... read
  • A review of The Tower
    by CarlaC on 04/08/2007
    Overall- I liked the story. It was funny at parts especially the scenes that took place at the Beyond The Third meetings. Some of the characters there were a hoot. Suggestions: First scenes in the hospital I feel are too long and full of redundancy, .ie. Ellie wanting Dorothy to stay and saying she doesn't have much time while Dorothy argues with her. I think the dialouge... read

Comments About CarlaC 14

  • jwest on 08/26/2008

    Hey, how are you over here?

    What are you writing on? Hope all well with you and yours, Carla.

    ; )
  • jwest on 07/02/2008

    Likewise Carla and thanks. That's sooo cool. Well done!

    Yay to you!

    :)
  • micmacmoviemaker on 07/02/2008

    Thanks -- the same to you!

    :)

    Why haven't you ever posted your script here on TS?
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