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I'm happy most of the time and I love to write. My prized possession is my diary--4600 pages. I've been keeping it since the age of seventeen. I dream of watching it burn to ashes in the Caldwell woods. Why? Some stories...
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I'm happy most of the time and I love to write. My prized possession is my diary--4600 pages. I've been keeping it since the age of seventeen. I dream of watching it burn to ashes in the Caldwell woods. Why? Some stories are meant to be told that way. I've been lost most of my life, mentally and spiritually. I was a stupid little boy aimlessly drifting with no dreams, wondering where the hell was I going to fit in at. Then I read a book by Iceberg Slim entitled Trick Baby. Upon finishing the book, my first thought was, he writes how I talk. Iceberg Slim gave me the belief that I myself was a storyteller. I now had a plan. It was like God had opened up the box and blinked at me. He'd given me a purpose in life. I didn't have much of an education at the time, but I knew I could put two, three, maybe four words together. I had imagination, but I needed to find my voice. I have since been to Film school and I haven't looked back.
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MOMMY'S ALRIGHT/DADDY'S ALRIGHT/THEY JUST SEEM A LITTLE WEIRD/SURRENDER, SURRENDER/BUT DON'TCHA GIVE YOURSELF AWAY...A review of The Cycleby CharlieBrown on 11/21/2005A very visual piece that keeps you guessing with all of the ingredients of a classical who-done-it. It has its shortcomings, but nothing that can't be fixed with a rewrite. Below is page-by-page account of my thoughts and feelings as I went through your piece. PAGE 1) Starts off really nice and evokes a sense of fear for that boy. At this point, the writing and the rhythm... read
A review of The Halls Of Mandrakeby CharlieBrown on 11/19/2005I really enjoyed this and thought all of the emotional truth was there. It made me laugh, it made me cry, and it made me think about just how important children are at such an impressionable age. Below is a page-by-page account of my feelings and thoughts as I went through your piece. Pg. 5) Will's dialogue, "I'm stronger than you think" makes me think he would be a... read
by CharlieBrown on 12/27/2004I could see why this was made. The old guy is filled with charm, charisma, and lots of widsom. I love them kites. That's something you don't see every day. I was wondering if this is a shorter piece to a longer version? If so, I don't think you'll have any problem getting it sold. Good job, and good luck with the rest of the contest.