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A review of Flight Paths

by Condrashoff on 06/24/2004

Flight Paths is an endearing sp for children. It is beautifully written and structurally sound. The story is fresh and original, and the concept is unique. The characters are clear and intriguing, and the dialogue is excellent. Ella's backstory, although sad, brought depth to the story. I enjoyed the fairly talk and the brilliant description of their strange world. The only... read

IT'S A GOOD LIFE

A review of Life In A Red Dress

by Condrashoff on 05/15/2004

I can tell from reading this screenplay that the author must be a perfectionist. When I started to read it, I couldn't stop and time went by quickly. The Character development, and dialogue were excellent, and the description was crisp. The story was good with turning points that grab, and a believable plot. The only fault I can make here, is that there needs to be another... read

DRIVE ME CRAZY

A review of DRIVER

by Condrashoff on 02/15/2004

This SP is fast paced and has an interesting premise, with a good couple of twist at the end. I can't fault the structure either. My big problem with this SP is that the characters are all so shallow and crass. I didn't care about any of them. Val's character was unrealistic. Who would a) not totally freak if they saw the apparition of Mike while driving and b) welcome fondling... read

FIZZY DAYS HAS ITS OWN STYLE

A review of 'FIZZY DAYS'

by Condrashoff on 02/10/2004

This play is definintely worth making. It is warm, human and funny. The characters, through their actions and dialogue expose who they are-the way it is supposed to be. The action and camera directions, although not usual, are worthwhile as they contribute to the style and tone of the play. There are technical problems but I don't think anyone could argue that they take much... read

GHOSTLY GOOD

A review of Ghost Of A Chance

by Condrashoff on 02/02/2004

Ghost of a Chance was a well writen script with excellent pacing and character development. The dialogue was mostly believable and before too long in the story I had a good sense of who the characters were. The child should call Ann something besides Mom. The way it ends with Ted and Kristin explaining to Jack that they came back for him is a bit to expository. Perhaps they... read

GLAD I READ THIS

A review of The Rising

by Condrashoff on 11/25/2003

When you read this screenplay, you get to know the author. He must be compassionate, sensitive, and insightful. This screenplay shows a depth of feeling that most other SP struggle to acheive, but rarely do. It is a pageturner, not because it is backdropped over a tragedy, but because the characters are people you want to get to know. It is good to know that the author did... read

Survival Instinct.

A review of THE SURVIVAL INSTINCT

by Condrashoff on 11/20/2003

Survival instinct was an easy read, with very good dialogue and character development. There are not many critisisms to be made of it, it is what it is. However, there are a few missed opportunites for improvement. When the flash backs of war start, I would show the whole event of why the plane crashed. There must be lots of high drama there that audiences love. The second... read

HOCKEY TO HANG YOUR HEART ON

A review of THE 16th MINUTE

by Condrashoff on 11/20/2003

OKAY, just to be completely honest, I HATE hockey. I don't relate to the game or the culture surrounding it, but....that didn't take away from my enjoyment of this screenplay. It is great to read a well writen screenplay. The structure was good, and the characters are multidimensional and believeable. The story, although not exactly original, was still compeling. One thing... read

FUNNY BUT FALLS APART

A review of Outrage

by Condrashoff on 11/14/2003

The first act of this play was witty and original. I settled in expecting to thoroughly enjoy the play. The second act was fast paced and things got even more interesting. But the third act scattered like the wind. It just didn't seem to keep focus, too much chit-chat in the dialogue that wasn't important to the story.It was as if the writer got to the third act and thought,... read

GREAT RENTAL MOVIE

A review of Blood Roses

by Condrashoff on 11/06/2003

I look at screenplays and movies as whether I would pay the extra buck at the theatre to see them, or if I would rather see it at home for $4.00. This script is very well written, easy to read. The Character development was good, some better than others. I would say Ruth's character was excellent in most respects. Why have the death of the beautiful blonde have such a so, so... read

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