damiz7o7 

member since 09/16/2009 | last login 02/09/2013

Seven short films produced. One full-feature under option....

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Seven short films produced. One full-feature under option.

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Reviews by damiz7o7 75

  • A review of Horror Story
    by damiz7o7 on 11/26/2012
    After a while of reading, I could tell that you were just having fun with this thing. It wasn't very funny for me, but I got a lot of the little nods. It's a little late for something like this, however. You'd have to change many of the names and throw in some Paranormal Activity or Jeepers Creepers stuff to be successful. I could definitely do without the singing bits, unless... read
  • A review of OLD ROTHBERGHIAN
    by damiz7o7 on 11/11/2012
    This story was just okay for me. I was lost numerous times during the story. You should definitely change the names Antonio and Anne to YOUNG ANTONIO and YOUNG ANNE. Visually I was getting confused when they were in scenes together. I like the concept. Searching memories in order to define the true love of your life. I couldn't accept the fact that the younger versions were... read
  • A review of Beasts of the Earth
    by damiz7o7 on 04/07/2010
    This wasn't too bad. I liked it. You built up a lot of intensity within your scenes, but I do have some quips. Your characters spoke too much like they were all teenagers in a Jason movie. Animals are trying to kill them and they say stuff like "Wanna make out?" WTF???? The whole thing is pretty dialogue heavy for a film idea like this. The absence of care when a boyfriend... read
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Comments About damiz7o7 45

  • TheLastGlance on 11/25/2012

    Thanks for your review. You're not the first person to not like it and that's cool. It's not for everyone. You're right about the slap scene, so I'll be utilizing your suggestion. Again, thanks and good luck in your own work. :)
  • gridlock on 11/12/2012

    Thanks for the review. Good point about Hazel peeing her pants, I changed it already. You did totally miss the part where they decide to get RID of the puppies, not get more, lol... no biggie though. No, the family doesn't find out (on film anyway) that it all happened because of the drugs. It's just naturally assumed. But it might be something for me to consider. Thanks again!
  • Magnet360 on 02/08/2012

    Thanks for the review of "Dead Man's Float". I'm hearing your concerns on a lot of the reviews. The next draft will be more serious and I'll try to get a grasp on tone. Thanks for taking the time to read and take notes on my scripts.

    Happy reading.
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