Surviving an auto accident head trama, homely Emma is confronted with her deadly, erotic, dark side.
I'm a retired technical writer and amateur historian, with plenty of time on my hands, living deep in the woods away from the madding crowd. No longer a wage slave, my mind is finally free to create and write the stories that...
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I'm a retired technical writer and amateur historian, with plenty of time on my hands, living deep in the woods away from the madding crowd. No longer a wage slave, my mind is finally free to create and write the stories that dance in my brain. I sit by my phone for hours on end waiting for some film maker like James Cameron or Clint Eastwood to call me about my script. Right, sure.
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A review of Got to Get Backby davidmcewing on 05/27/2011Good script with plenty of action. Realistic characters and smooth dialog, however... First off, you should delete all the camera directions - focus, zoom, pan. Leave all this to the director and just write the story. Page 12 - How does the movie viewer know that Starburst is missing something? You have to show it somehow with dialog or action. Page 38 - 'Bubba pats his... read
A review of The Current (Version 2)by davidmcewing on 04/25/2011I found this script to be well written with good exposition. The characters were defined, although there was too many considering the depth of the story. The dialog flowed naturally and formatting seemed correct. I think Colonel Cleveland's dialog was a bit long winded. Just remember that the actor has to memorize these lines. Page 80 - You need to eliminate the needless and... read
A review of Coma Girlby davidmcewing on 04/05/2011This is a unique and intriguing script. Your exposition is good, but you write like a novelist instead of a screenwriter. We're all guilty of this at times. It's a hard habit to break. Your characters are realistic and the dialog flows right along. I couldn't find too much wrong, except that you could use half as many characters. Page 4 - The rewind concept is interesting,... read