An average Joe battles a magician to woo the girl of his dreams
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A review of Crossing the Road(V2.0)by dcahill on 09/10/2013This was by far one of the sweetest screenplays I've ever read; it was full of heart, and some sequences really were outstanding and very touching. (specifically, when the Halloween 'ghost' gives John some candy, and then later when John finds Jane at her apartment. Both scenes were fantastic, and written and paced perfectly) I really did like and empathize with both lead... read
A review of Morning Voiceby dcahill on 09/08/2013As a big fan of comedy (and karaoke), I was really happy to get this assignment. Your writing style is professional, and this is a fun read. Ezra and Emma are likable characters, and they have good chemistry, so well done there. I especially liked their meet cute (and the general nod to movie meet-cutes via Ezra's attempts). I really like a lot of the comedy on display... read
A review of The neighborby dcahill on 09/03/2013First, and with all sincerity, a big congratulations on finishing the screenplay. Writing one of these takes a lot of determination, so well done! I think your concept is potentially strong. Kind of a Seven meets Saw kind of thing, with a dab of Frailty. I liked the idea of the Deacon being the main character (that creates some additional problems, which I will highlight... read