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    4/20 Credited Review
    A review of 4/20: The Legend of Mayan Midnight
    by **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 05/11/2013
    First of all, this sp is 112 pages not 116, clean up the invisible text in the last four pages. Apologies upfront:This review is bound to be scatterbrained so take it for what it's worth. First impressions, I like your action language and descriptions, it's fresh, unique and entertaining to read, but in some way it may be a bit too much -- consider toning it down now and... read
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    Very interesting storyline Credited Review
    A review of Night Owls
    by **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 04/23/2013
    The best thing about this story is the intrigue that it has. It's just two men meeting on a path in the night and having a bit of a chat, yet I had to know what the resolution of the story would be. It was simple, but the concept seemed quite unique to me. The characters were interesting and the dialogue was alright - realistic but not brilliant. Although the concluding few... read
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    Idyll Isles Review Credited Review
    A review of Idyll Isles - Harbinger
    by **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 03/26/2013
    I found you script to be fantastic. I couldn't believe how flowing and satisfying your action scenes were. I fail at them all the time so to see yours was wonderful. All of your characters are great. But I did have some reservations with the protagonist and others. I felt that in the first 10 pages, I wasn't connecting with the character. Maybe rework the scenes so I feel... read
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  • Buchu
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    Buchu on 07/07/2012

    Hey DELETED ACCOUNT, wassup? I know we just met, and this is crazy but-- could you consider these three tips, please?
    1. Don't snort or drink or shoot a bunch of stimulants before you review. Seriously.
    2. Maybe, you know, try not to come off as the supreme authority on screenwriting... even if you are some hot shizz.... cool it. Arrogance is a real ugly trait.
    3. Ever hear of innovation? Sometimes it's ok to break the rules.... try reading the WHOLE screenplay, and then decide if it's really worth it to criticize the heck outta the poor writer for having a touch of camera direction or cliched dialogue.
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    **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 10/19/2009

    Frailty’s Baggage~Channeling Jim Morrison written by me:)

    There is no grief in language
    when you’re stricken, cast down,
    changes silhouette past silence
    pausing sullenly through the
    echoing corridors of my mind.
    Torn posters without poetry,
    without song, without love,
    face hopes and fears in the mirrors
    of pain; and his sex hangs unhidden,
    and his metal heart sweeps though
    abandoned philosophy as the curtain
    closes on the sensual train.

    I want repetition of song, recollection
    in truth; to create from the oblique,
    denying the erotic, an obeisance to
    the power it steals from those of us
    who can’t find anything to live for,
    but everything to die for. Cast not your
    demons of treachery, tears, anger, and
    betrayal on me; the elevator is rising.
    There’s fumbled endorphins offered
    up as a cocktail with some really good
    whiskey and meth cocaine. Smell the
    lily and the rose,

    let the bricks soften to deep greens,
    let God speak austere though vacant
    fields while you grow stillborn
    through drugs so sweet. Let the
    suicide take on it’s own craft and magic,
    as day light comes and a stranger’s face
    brings forgiveness; blooming, blooming,
    in the scent of your sweet blood. Your rib
    is gone, son of Adam and He shall
    have her heart; lowered lids expand as
    they rise in total annihilation. Tick tock.
    White roses growing in the corner,

    lilies dead on the sidewalk.
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    **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 01/30/2009

    I hope challenged reviews from deleted accounts are automatically axed at the HOJ. No hit and run reviews (or hit and puff up reviews) should be allowed on the site.
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