After being framed for murder, a disgraced Mexican-American soldier returns to a tiny Mexican village that has... more
I am an English Major from the University of Delaware. I'm returning to screenwriting after five years due to chronic unemployment....
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I am an English Major from the University of Delaware. I'm returning to screenwriting after five years due to chronic unemployment.
Reviews by desertfox641b 5
A review of Violaby desertfox641b on 04/01/2010The first act, and the first half of the the second act are chuck full of great characters, witty dialogue, and intriguing plot twist. But all good things must come to an end. Unfortunately, this story ends long before the typing does. At the midpoint, there is an agonizing genre shift when the story morphs from a procedural film noir send-up (done well, I might say) into... read
A review of OUR GREEN CITYby desertfox641b on 04/01/2010The first rule of conflict between Protagonist and Antagonist. - The antagonist has to be much, much worse than the protagonist. In this story, the two characters, Eric and John, seem more like politicians in a general election fighting for the right to power, because they believe they know what's best for everyone else. They don't. The problem is...I agree with the... read