desertfox641b 

member since 01/10/2004 | last login 07/07/2011

I am an English Major from the University of Delaware. I'm returning to screenwriting after five years due to chronic unemployment....

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I am an English Major from the University of Delaware. I'm returning to screenwriting after five years due to chronic unemployment.

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Reviews by desertfox641b 5

  • A review of Viola
    by desertfox641b on 04/01/2010
    The first act, and the first half of the the second act are chuck full of great characters, witty dialogue, and intriguing plot twist. But all good things must come to an end. Unfortunately, this story ends long before the typing does. At the midpoint, there is an agonizing genre shift when the story morphs from a procedural film noir send-up (done well, I might say) into... read
  • A review of OUR GREEN CITY
    by desertfox641b on 04/01/2010
    The first rule of conflict between Protagonist and Antagonist. - The antagonist has to be much, much worse than the protagonist. In this story, the two characters, Eric and John, seem more like politicians in a general election fighting for the right to power, because they believe they know what's best for everyone else. They don't. The problem is...I agree with the... read

Comments About desertfox641b 2

  • Indigo on 04/06/2010

    I just want to make sure you know that the Troll Spray thing on the message board wasn't aimed at you. You probably knew that but I wanted to make sure.

    It was the other guy they were aiming at.
  • Ed Rodgers on 04/01/2010

    Thanks for the review of Viola. Your comments are appreciated and will be taken into account for the next draft.

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