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by digitalisentertainment on 09/16/2009

This was a very well written screenplay. You were careful enough to scrutinize each detail and that made it easier for the reader to get a clear picture of what was happening. The characters were excellently written. They weren’t one dimensional and their personalities were different from one another and yet they shared many similarities at the same time. Hewitt, Larry and... read

Under A Killing Moon

A review of Under A Killing Moon

by digitalisentertainment on 09/14/2009

This was a fantastic read. There was not a single formatting or grammatical error which made it so much easier to read. Pacing the story so effectively worked in its favor though I’d suggest lengthening the prison scene, which can be used as an opportunity to define Thompson’s character further. I liked the characters and the way you described them in the beginning, especially... read

Killing the Seeds

A review of Killing the Seeds

by digitalisentertainment on 09/08/2009

This was a mighty effort for the first draft of your first screenplay. The plot was reminiscent of the early 90’s action flicks and it was quite entertaining. Act II and III were well paced though Act I was a bit slow, maybe because of the heavy use of descriptions in the first 35 pages or so. The screenplay needs to be thoroughly scanned for spelling errors which kept popping... read

I Want To Kill

A review of i WanT tO kiLL

by digitalisentertainment on 09/04/2009

This was quite a disturbing read. The overwhelming urge to kill and the satisfaction derived out of it was portrayed excellently. I loved the way Ned’s character was drawn. There were times when one felt sympathetic towards him and there were times when he was really repulsive. His dysfunctional family was a catalyst in his transformation; which is why they were to be blamed... read

Nevada Low Ball

A review of Nevada Low Ball(final)

by digitalisentertainment on 08/26/2009

I hardly come across a screenplay which is as flawless as this. There was not a single formatting or grammatical error. The writing was clear and precise. I particularly liked the structure and treatment given to the story. By inserting flashbacks at the right times and using the back-and-forth treatment, a good story turned into an exceptional screenplay. The characters were... read

Carny

A review of Carny

by digitalisentertainment on 08/25/2009

Let me start by saying that the structure and treatment, both were excellent. I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors which is a rarity in itself. The concept is unique and intriguing. The characters were skillfully written. They were totally believable and seemed natural. I would’ve liked to see more scenes involving the skinheads. Quite a few dialogues (Sometimes... read

Let Them Come Apart

A review of Let Them Come Apart

by digitalisentertainment on 08/24/2009

The start was excellent. In the first 5 pages the relationship between the two main protagonists was established and a strong hook was built to arouse the curiosity of the reader. Act I and II were perfectly paced but Act III could do with a bit of editing. The dialogues were very realistic and all the characters were developed beautifully. This screenplay had quite a few powerful... read

Fire Heart

A review of Fire Heart

by digitalisentertainment on 08/20/2009

This wasn’t anything like I’ve read before and quite a few aspects of the screenplay impressed me. I loved the portrayal of Fierra’s family and their eccentric behavior was mildly shocking but very entertaining. Joseph’s and Leanne’s characters shared great chemistry and their unconventional way of thinking, raising their daughter and their immoral views on marriage highlighted... read

Dead Mountain

A review of Dead Mountain

by digitalisentertainment on 08/17/2009

This was a very well written screenplay. The story was propelled with a strong sense of casualty and nothing seemed to be forced. You did a great job with the characters, especially William, Fingers and John. William's leadership qualities came out really well. He never backed down, never left his teammates behind and was always determined and optimistic. Fingers was excellent... read

Ground Work

A review of Ground Work (early draft)

by digitalisentertainment on 08/13/2009

This was an engaging read. The premise of this story was naturally intriguing. The pacing was fantastic and no scene was wasted or unnecessary. The central theme of murder and terrorism was highlighted skillfully through varied perspectives. I liked how neither of the main characters was given names. It made them seem ambiguous and dangerous. The Arab’s character was excellently... read

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