dmellas 

member since 01/06/2003 | last login 05/28/2010

A former Executive with Televisa International, LLC in Miami (of Grupo Televisa, SA in Mexico City), now returned to Orange County and teaching in Los Angeles as a College Professor....

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A former Executive with Televisa International, LLC in Miami (of Grupo Televisa, SA in Mexico City), now returned to Orange County and teaching in Los Angeles as a College Professor.

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Reviews by dmellas 39

  • A review of Bad Land
    by dmellas on 02/18/2005
    So you've deliberately embraced every archetype that makes a B-movie, well, predictable and unchallenging. Still, the "old-school" rules can't be abandoned and you have to have a story in there somewhere. B-movies that become popular may be mindless and trivial, but something creative always holds some interest. When you, as the author, loose track of your own body count... read
  • A review of Ropeswing
    by dmellas on 02/14/2005
    It's pretty clear where your influence is coming from, but this was a really "fun" screenplay and I enjoyed it and liked its possibilities. Your formatting needs a little improvement and you are using a style not generally employed here. You shouldn't include camera directions or music selections - just focus on the story. You also seem to get sloppy and include dialogue... read
  • A review of The Shogunate
    by dmellas on 11/25/2003
    An incongruent mix of elements from different genres. At some times there were messages of philosophical profundity, at others the writing was specious and often the physics was wrong. You'll tumble more than 50 yards after spilling off a bike at 180 MPH! If something whizzes past your ear from a shotgun, you've been hit! And those bikes have too many keypads and computer screens... read
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