Four bank robbers are stranded in a nearly abandoned town where the residents are not quite what they seem.
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A review of The Scribe 2nd draftby dmw256 on 05/07/2013I will start off by saying that I am a fan of religious fiction - whether it be contemporary supernatural thrillers, apocalyptic films, or retellings of old biblical tales in a new and unfamiliar setting. So, if you're film was made, I would probably go see it. But with that said, your film suffers from what ails all films with Jesus as a character - he is detached and is hard... read
A review of The Torchby dmw256 on 05/01/2013My first question: Is paddy wagon a term still used today? I liked this story. I was not blown away by it, but I feel it has potential - possibly somewhere in between Fantastic Four and Iron Man 3. The set-up was good. I liked that these two kids had superpowers. I don't know if this was intended, or if others experienced this, but I felt that there, for most of the script,... read
A review of Movingby dmw256 on 04/29/2013This script suffers from too much on the nose dialogue. I may know of one person that just constantly talks like your characters, but your script is filled with them and it doesn't ring true or natural. The characters are constantly talking and expressing their feelings. There is no silence - and in film (especially in a story that you're attempting to tackle) - silence can... read