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A review of Father Max Rev. 2

by duff on 10/04/2006

I like stories that carry an underlying message and moral theme, and this story's strength is built on such. Just the reality and the fact that we must remember, need to remember the monstrosities and evalities of the past in hopes that we can salvage enough courage to speak out against what is wrong, and speak for what is right, so that these evil cycles do not repeat, make... read

MEOW!

A review of SWAP

by duff on 07/31/2004

i didn't think I'd like this when I first started reading, but after the fith page, i started to get drawn in and it just got better as the story moved along. I think it would be hillarious onscreen. The concept was really interesting. The characters had their own personality traitswhich was nice- Father Mother was a niceinsert, although I had my doubts at first. Some of... read

EVERY MAN'S DREAM lol

A review of A Bed Of Thorns

by duff on 06/16/2004

It seemd to get better as the story went along, which is kinda what you hope for.Reminds me a bit of misery, nly the man is getting pleasured and tortured by two beautiful psychotic women -Bobbit comes to mind - Now there's a name that makes every man's ears perk up. I guess the moral of this story ould be: Careful: Just because it looks god and tastes good, doesn't mean it's... read

I moved along well

A review of The Trolley that Ate Farnham

by duff on 06/07/2004

I like the way the piece moved along the best - The creators sence of rythm make the piece better. I was not overly moved by the subject matter, although I thought it was put together well. I was waiting to be suprised by the content, but never was. I think the makers have a good start as far as how to keep an audience interested just by the pacing of the film. When they... read

cute kid piece

A review of Spy vs. Spy

by duff on 05/15/2004

It was a cute pice - Perhaps the kid could act in some disney films, but no dialogue, so can't judge full potential. Very short, which didn't leave much time to establish much of a story line. I liked the music, and it was right on cue with the action. Look forward to something a bit longer with a more complicated plot, dialogue and action.

TOP NOTCH!!!

A review of Chimera

by duff on 02/12/2003

CHIMERA, a must read. This is one of the best Sci-fi I have seen. You have written an incredible action filled sci-fi, and I can't wait to read the sequel. If the right person reads this, then you will be needed on the set for your expert indepth intellect of the matter. I have nothing that can help you out with this piece, other than pointing out a few minor typos. Great... read

EDRYCH I FYNEW

A review of The Passtime

by duff on 01/19/2003

Overal, it's not a bad read. Personally, I think it could use more twists or something to grab your attention. Up to page 33, still same, nothing to really grab you. First real conflict (44) when Jana & Tim are decidedly going for the same position - may want to do this sooner and have more pitfalls for each along the way. Again, just opinion. Pg 65, switching the stories... read

VERY IMAGINATIVE

A review of JANUARY ONE

by duff on 12/14/2002

It's refreshing to read something that stretches the imagination from its norm. To me, that's what going to the movies is about - so you can escape and go on an adventure. Way too many typical movie plots today, and this is not. The read was great. The only slow spot was in the begining, but you made up for it through the rest of the story. Dialogue was good and characters... read

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