earmight 

member since 11/06/2009 | last login 02/01/2012

I'm a rank beginner. I figured reading a variety of scripts would be a good way to learn so I joined Triggerstreet. I think this site is a great idea. There's a lot of talent out there. Plus, I've discovered my own...

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I'm a rank beginner. I figured reading a variety of scripts would be a good way to learn so I joined Triggerstreet. I think this site is a great idea. There's a lot of talent out there. Plus, I've discovered my own penchant for proofreading.

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Reviews by earmight 22

  • A review of PAWN
    by earmight on 02/18/2010
    Your writing style is pretty good, it flows. But, you have a tendency to overstate things sometimes. For example: "Luke is 31, tall, ruggedly good-looking, with a face that looks like itís been through the wars." You had me at "ruggedly" and didn't need to say "been through the wars". I like your use of the quick flashbacks, it's very effective for setting a mood... read
  • A review of WHISPERS
    by earmight on 01/18/2010
    I'm a beginner at this, but I'm good at finding typos and spelling errors, so I'll point those out, I hope that helps. Just a thought: At the start, you have Amina closing the doors on the children and it struck me as odd. Don't people usually leave the doors open, or at least cracked, especially with infants? pg 3 (top) - "She wraps her fingers on the desk." Should it... read
  • A review of A Constant Variable
    by earmight on 12/20/2009
    The different font really stands out. It's too bad they aren't a little more liberal about that. No title page? I'll be pointing out typos as I go because I'm good at spotting them. I hope that helps. pg 3 (bottom) - "...Tayah pulls out a handkerchief and uses it the push the..." should be "...uses it to push the..." pg 4 (bottom) - "...bore you with a philosophical discussion,... read
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Comments About earmight 14

  • emelindab on 11/30/2010

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review Americana!!!
    I appreciate your sharp eye finding all those typos *blushes* Spell
    check ain't got nothing on you! You echo the same sentiments as a
    good friend of mine. He says my, "Broadcast News" ending, just ain't
    cutting it!
    I have lots of work to do!!!

    Thanks a million!
    emelindab
  • Christopher O'Rourke on 11/23/2010

    Hi earmight-

    Thanks very much for reading "Out of the Badlands" and giving me your thoughts. I'm currently giving it a rewrite to address the excess descriptive passages, as several people have pointed this out to me.

    I appreciated your insight.

    -Chris
  • swantonjohn on 12/18/2009

    Thanks for taking the time to read and review Out of Line!
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