On Halloween a night, a frightening battle ensues between bad and evil
member since 08/04/2010 | last login 04/30/2013
finished highschool. Gap year. doing work,research,etc....
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finished highschool. Gap year. doing work,research,etc.
Submissions by Envy
Reviews by Envy 14
A review of Dead Airby Envy on 10/08/2012Okay, that's a bit harsh. The thing is the screenplay was kinda great. Great characters, incredibly well written dialogue and I loved the theme of radio and the role it plays in media and some people's hearts but the overall story was a bit underwhelming. There are all these plot lines that seem to go nowhere (the shooter situation), come out of nowhere (Vince's lawsuit),... read
A review of Slayer of Mage and Sorcerersby Envy on 08/06/2012Well, this has been an interesting read. At times it felt like I was going through a video game as opposed to an actual story. The fights scenes are nice but in my opinion you need to add more depth and complexity to your characters, some were completely useless and I see no reason as to why they were there. Like Cameron, his motive was sketchy and it turned out that he wasn't... read
A review of Suicide Shiftby Envy on 10/01/2011Well, the concept of this was pretty good - a divided society plagued with a rise in suicides. But there were some details that didn't seem to add up. You may get arrested for if you assist at up to 4 people's suicides but there is a job where you are required to watch people jump off a bridge? That doesn't sound right. And the concept spirals down to a certain type of story... read