evadr1

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Energetic financial planner with many varied interests. Enjoy exploring and learning new things, spanning many venues and worlds. A car accident, left me a quadraplegic, my interests moving from competitive sports, to finding other outlets such as writing song lyrics, novel, screenplay, etc. Due to injury, all writings were accomplished with a mouthstick, pecking out one letter at a time.

Submissions by evadr1

TEXAS BLUE MOON

a screenplay by evadr1

Genres: drama

Original songs and lyrics played through a charismatic musician, Jim Tanner who is finally getting notice in the... more

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Reviews by evadr1 4

good but need clarity

A review of Original Face

by evadr1 on 01/12/2003

I found this short compelling and mesmorizing specially after the production notes helped bring the artists vision from a grainy, leaving me wondering why?, to a better grasp on what he was looking to project-overall, this artist (jason), looks like he has other projects which will gain him even more creedence.
NEW YORK HEIST

A review of Manhatten Transfer

by evadr1 on 01/01/2003

WELL WRITTEN SCRIPT ABOUT EX-CON, Jack Harris, who enjoys a good robbery-for all the right reasons. Felt character development was good and supporting mob stereotypes more than adequate. Enjoyed the twists and turns as Jack Harris loses control of bank opportunity only to regain with deft, schrewd manuevering-Very enjoyable and dialogue and interactions between characters visual... read
DARK, WELL-SORT OF

A review of SCULPT!

by evadr1 on 01/01/2003

Enjoyedthescript, had an English feel that held throughout. Thought it a little short(around 88 pages, but felt the twist and turns were well thought out. Maybe flesh out the characters a little more, make boyfriend and friends less likeable will add more realism to their actions. Overall-enjoyed it-

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Submissions by evadr1

TEXAS BLUE MOON

a screenplay by evadr1

Genres: drama

Original songs and lyrics played through a charismatic musician, Jim Tanner who is finally getting notice in the... more

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Reviews by evadr1 4

good but need clarity

A review of Original Face

by evadr1 on 01/12/2003

I found this short compelling and mesmorizing specially after the production notes helped bring the artists vision from a grainy, leaving me wondering why?, to a better grasp on what he was looking to project-overall, this artist (jason), looks like he has other projects which will gain him even more creedence.
NEW YORK HEIST

A review of Manhatten Transfer

by evadr1 on 01/01/2003

WELL WRITTEN SCRIPT ABOUT EX-CON, Jack Harris, who enjoys a good robbery-for all the right reasons. Felt character development was good and supporting mob stereotypes more than adequate. Enjoyed the twists and turns as Jack Harris loses control of bank opportunity only to regain with deft, schrewd manuevering-Very enjoyable and dialogue and interactions between characters visual... read
DARK, WELL-SORT OF

A review of SCULPT!

by evadr1 on 01/01/2003

Enjoyedthescript, had an English feel that held throughout. Thought it a little short(around 88 pages, but felt the twist and turns were well thought out. Maybe flesh out the characters a little more, make boyfriend and friends less likeable will add more realism to their actions. Overall-enjoyed it-

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