friendgm 

member since 08/11/2011 | last login 03/28/2012

A law student who loves to write....

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A law student who loves to write.

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Reviews by friendgm 3

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    Review: The Archangel Credited Review
    A review of The Archangel
    by friendgm on 02/03/2012
    This was a different story than from what I'm used to. This was a different take on the idea of angels and mortals. First off I do like the idea of starting off with an action scene. It grabbed my attention right away. However, my attention and interest seemed to fade... A couple notes on why that may have been: - Excessive use of SUPER: This became extremely distracting... read
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    a concoction of gods and the darkness of the gangster-era Credited Review
    A review of Night Falls on Olympus
    by friendgm on 01/28/2012
    The concept of this script is a mixture of two ideas that one wouldn't think would go together, but you brought the two together perfectly. The idea of ancient gods living in the gangster-era of the 1940s is very unique and creative. I applaud you on such creativity. Pros: - Phineas is an amazing character. His attitude, his demeanor show a dark man, yet the way he is... read

Comments About friendgm 5

  • Chuckeline Norris
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    Chuckeline Norris on 02/08/2012

    Muahahaha. How about that for making a good impression. Now the title makes sense, thanks!
  • wildandfree74
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    wildandfree74 on 02/06/2012

    Friend, thank you very much for your review and your perspective, it will help with all the work it needs! Appreciate the time, thanks again.
  • Christopher O'Rourke
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    Christopher O'Rourke on 01/28/2012

    Thanks for reading and reviewing "Night Falls on Olympus". You offered some good notes that I will take into consideration. Also, thanks a bunch for catching those typos!

    Cheers-
    Chris
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