gaurav_darko 

member since 07/16/2009 | last login 08/27/2012

I am a Media student doing Audio-Visual production course. I live on a diet of movies and books. it's my dream and aim to become a successful screenplay writer and director....

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I am a Media student doing Audio-Visual production course. I live on a diet of movies and books. it's my dream and aim to become a successful screenplay writer and director.

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Reviews by gaurav_darko 5

  • A review of Dropped
    by gaurav_darko on 04/13/2012
    Congrats! You were successful in making me flinch and shift uncomfortably in my chair as I read the part where the girl pushes him to the floor. This means that the language used here is good. But, on the flip side, it feels incomplete, like an abstract from some story. It is just a glimpse of something bigger. I think you should expand a bit on it. Since its too short, I can't... read
  • by gaurav_darko on 12/11/2011
    Your theme is very intriguing. I must admit that sometimes i could relate to some parts. It is understood that this guy has been dealt a raw deal throughout all his childhood, which has given birth to a consciously ignorant, repulsing personality in him. There are still some grammatical mistakes in the body. The theme is similar to many of the great existential-themed novels,... read
  • A review of The Lover
    by gaurav_darko on 12/07/2011
    First thing's first. It is a generic idea BUT beautifully treated. The power of any story lies in its treatment. This story has its heart and mind in the right place. The language is simple, the narrative is smooth and the end twist is good. It is in the end that it i fully revealed that they both were only cyber-friends and one had never met the other, but if you read closely,... read
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Comments About gaurav_darko 2

  • gaurav_darko on 12/07/2011

    thank u so much. i admit that with office and all, keeping up to date with things become a bit of a problem. But now I have decided to be here everyday after office. So, upload more of you work. :)
  • f-ceska on 12/07/2011

    Hello and thank you for your review of 'The Lover'. I'm glad you enjoyed it. To tell the truth I wrote this a very long time ago, when the internet was still new, and anything was possible.

    Welcome back to Trigger Street (I see you've been away for a long time) and good luck with your writing / directing.

    Francesca

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