Retired 40 years Federal law enforcement.A few months a "screenwriter". Successful at the first, running in knee deep mud on the second....
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Retired 40 years Federal law enforcement.A few months a "screenwriter". Successful at the first, running in knee deep mud on the second.
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A review of The Walking Manby gclifton on 04/26/2011You've taken an unlikely fantasy scenario and honed it into a readable, interesting tale. Your descriptions, fears, and thoughts are vivid. In taking on a project like this and having to stretch a limited experience into six pages, the various pieces sometimes run a trifle long, but then the experiences ARE the story. Have you considered giving the speaker a little back... read
A review of Glimpseby gclifton on 04/25/2011Well, I've read it twice. The writer is very accomplished in word usage, catchy phrases, and metaphors. I guess I'll be embarrased to read I mis- interpeted this piece, but as I see it, Carter's problems stem from playing with sparking toys following lasik surgery. He is either hallucinating or has been cross circuited into some very heavy stuff and may well now have X-Ray... read
A review of HOURS ENDby gclifton on 04/25/2011Happyville is going to hell -- overrun by those hungry neighbors. Or maybe they're just greedy former taxpayers who've gone bust because politicianS spent all the money. And that slimeball Thomas. Offer the protag a pizza, then invade lkie Attila the Hungry and tear up the place. This is an interesting read, if for no other reason, the uncertainty of what the holy neb is going... read