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member since 02/08/2010 | last login 10/31/2010
An aspiring filmmaker looking for critiques to better myself as a writer....
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An aspiring filmmaker looking for critiques to better myself as a writer.
Submissions by godspeedpro
Reviews by godspeedpro 13
A review of Nice Boyby godspeedpro on 10/12/2010I really like your writing style, you display the story just enough to know what's going on, time period, etc. What I got from this story was a man who did not like to be considered a boy but truly still was a boy at heart. Correct me if I'm wrong but this story takes place in the 50s or 60s? If not, for some reason I got that vibe. Your structure and simple and to the point... read
A review of Two Liarsby godspeedpro on 08/20/2010First receiving this script, the sight of 152 pgs almost turned me off. Although unlike most users on trigger st., who would have immediately removed it because of that (I know from experience lol) I'm a writer who judges AFTER I read scripts in their entireties. All in all I liked the story, your dialogue is well written and believable for the setting. But the main problem... read
A review of Everyone Will Dieby godspeedpro on 04/05/2010Okay tostart this review off, I wanted to say i really did enjoy this sp. Comedy is definately something hard to pull off, and what you have here is a very dark comedy. A few things wrong: You had mispellings of Derrick/Derek, and Ms.Graves/Ms.Allen in a coupleof places. And typos here and there, another read through will help you fix those. Concept: I Truly did enjoy... read