A story about imperfect, flawed characters and plans for redemption that go wrong
Descartes walks into a bar. The bartender asks, ‘Can I get you a drink?’ Descartes replies, ‘I think not’…and disappears....
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Descartes walks into a bar. The bartender asks, ‘Can I get you a drink?’ Descartes replies, ‘I think not’…and disappears.
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A review of The Old Man's Paintingby gulfcoastomega on 04/23/2013This was a very interesting story. Overview: Simon and his dog live and old man’s reclusive life. He suffers pain from a car accident that happened many years ago and his daily activity is painting multiple versions of a World War Two era actress who later appears to him. My thoughts: -Page 5 First hint of conflict -Page 8 The actress appears to Simon in 1800’s era dress... read
A review of The Flyoverby gulfcoastomega on 04/21/2013I liked this story. It was written with good flow and description. My thoughts on the piece: Forgive me but as a Yankee my knowledge of British terminology comes from watching 'Are You Being Served?' on PBS. I thought the title 'The Flyover' indicated a story about aircraft, as I was unaware of another meaning. But it turns out the equivalent USA term for ‘flyover’ would be... read
A review of Long Time Friendsby gulfcoastomega on 02/19/2013This was an interesting story. It was written with good flow, description and dialogue. My only comments are with regard to the structure. The story centers around two characters Dana and Henry, but since a story would have one main character to serve as a protagonist we have to say that Dana is the main character. Our main character Dana does not encounter the story’s conflict... read