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  Michael Leath on 04/24/2013

  Posers - really. I've read your stuff. I don't think posers is accurate at all.
  
  But thanks for the review.
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  filmfamman on 04/24/2013

  thanks for the review and the suggestions, very much appreciated
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  Michael Leath on 04/10/2013

  Glenn, you are the first person to see the three acts in Missive. I purposely wrote it that way. Very impressed that you caught that. I was afraid after so many reviews I either missed the boat, or it was so subtle it was invisible.
  
  Great call.
  
  Thanks for reading it. I appreciate your thoughts.
  
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Comments About gulfcoastomega 26

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  Michael Leath on 04/24/2013

  Posers - really. I've read your stuff. I don't think posers is accurate at all.
  
  But thanks for the review.
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  M
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  filmfamman on 04/24/2013

  thanks for the review and the suggestions, very much appreciated
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  Michael Leath on 04/10/2013

  Glenn, you are the first person to see the three acts in Missive. I purposely wrote it that way. Very impressed that you caught that. I was afraid after so many reviews I either missed the boat, or it was so subtle it was invisible.
  
  Great call.
  
  Thanks for reading it. I appreciate your thoughts.
  
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  Michael Leath on 04/01/2013

  Glenn, we all fear not being understood. You just have to write the best you can, and go from there. You have a clear voice. Don't fret over it. The great thing about being a writer is you improve. Every written word is an exercise in getting better.
  
  My writing is far superior to what it was even a year ago. I bet your writing is too.
  
  I am beginning to think of the short story in three acts. To decide what i want to do with each act and what my goals are. To lead the reader down the path I want.
  
  For instance, when you have a lot of action, shorter sentences make the action leap off the page. You still have to write something interesting. After reading your work I doubt that you do much boring stuff. But you probably do, just like all of us. But you also probably know when you are doing it once you back away and leave the piece for a while.
  
  I call that fresh eyes, and it hones the story for me.
  
  You have a distinct voice that is clear cut.
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  Michael Leath on 03/27/2013

  Thank you for your review of Julia. I appreciate you taking time to read it. I'll consider some of the things you have written about it when I do a polish. Thanks again.
  
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  dunphoid on 06/04/2012

  Thanks so much for your kind review of I Don't Bite :o)
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  MaxWatt on 05/20/2012

  Thanks for the review. I appreciate your time and effort. To be honest I prefer not to think of the character as a hero, but just a reflection of the columbine killers. He kills for recognition. Again, thanks.
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  Revale on 05/13/2012

  Dude, stop it. You're making us all look bad with this perpetual golden boy of writing stuff. But congratulations on The Angel of Woodward Avenue being featured... too! We've been heaping love on you in the message boards.
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  Revale on 05/02/2012

  Congratulations on "This Bad in El Paso" being featured. Well deserved.
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  vieira4 on 04/16/2012

  Hi. Thanks ever so much for your review of 'He's Not My Friend, He's My Brother'. You seem to have understood it better than most.
  
  I deliberately didn't include names etc., because I wanted people to guess which real-life people I based these two on. Their location is a clue :D I know I could fill in a lot more, but I wanted to keep it very short. Glad you enjoyed it.

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