High Road
member since 11/28/2010 |
last login 03/05/2013
Thys writingg thin@ wouldfm't be so bad if it weren't 4 all thas dang tieping....
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Thys writingg thin@ wouldfm't be so bad if it weren't 4 all thas dang tieping.
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Reviews by High Road 4
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A review of Paschal's Wagerby High Road on 05/09/2011This was an interesting read for me, and I won’t trouble it with concerns about the rare typo or the use of a singular form instead of plural. You have the skills to pay the bills, so you’ll just have to find that stuff on your own. I have only a couple of suggestions to make and not much else to say. In general and specifics, the formatting, use of devices, all the mechanics,... read
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A review of The Saintmakerby High Road on 05/08/2011I'm not a big believer in or fan of magic wands or lucky charms of any size or color, but I will say this about your play: very well written with cinematic action, spot on structure, accomplished expositional device and prim plotting. I've seen this movie before, though, and so didn't get entirely pulled into the intrigue. What came to mind is the question of influence on... read
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Hey, just a quick note too say I thought your script was fantastic, but alas my review less so; i had made a load of notes which my Ipad conspired to eat, so I kind of just did it off the top of my head. I do apologise, but hope you are able to get something out of it.
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Hi High Road-
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Many thanks for your review and comments on The Saintmaker. It's greatly appreciated!
+ more commentsDan Cassell on 06/09/2011
To be quite frank, I'm am downright flabbergasted its not ranked considerably higher
Dan
bthielke on 05/14/2011
Thanks for the notes on Paschal's Wager. I was secretly hoping folks like you and Brian would be reading this. I definitely didn't want to write a religious screed so your input on the places where I was starting to venture into that territory were welcome. In the long run, it's supposed to be a story about living with your own choices and how they can pay dividends in the long term even if it appears you've failed in the short term. As a parent, you'll learn to understand exactly what I'm talking about ;) Anyways, I will certainly look at your comments with a great deal of scrutiny on my rewrite.
bob
Fitzy on 05/09/2011
Cheers,
Fitzy