hrickclark 

member since 11/11/2002 | last login 05/25/2005

I have written and produce two motion pictures, one television documentary and countless news articles. I got away from writing, now that I am retired I'm going back to it. My first effort is a screenplay REPARATION OF A SERIAL KILLER, it's...

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I have written and produce two motion pictures, one television documentary and countless news articles. I got away from writing, now that I am retired I'm going back to it. My first effort is a screenplay REPARATION OF A SERIAL KILLER, it's a story about a serial killer. His mother is an LAPD homicide detective who is hunting him while he is stalking her.Good luck and hunting to all that use triggerstreet.com

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  • A review of 1066
    by hrickclark on 04/15/2005
    The script feels like it was well researched giving it a feel of authenticity. There is a basic flaw in the script however, the format for a spec screenplay is wrong. That may seem like a petty complaint but it's wrong enough to keep it from being read by a reader. Don't try to put camera shots or angles in a script. My opinion is that Movie Magic or ScriptWriter should... read
  • A review of Chihuahua Popcorn
    by hrickclark on 02/08/2005
    It's hard to review a working draft because it's hard to tell which way the writer is trying to take the story. To me it was short of being a comedy and past being drama. If it's meant to be comedy use some comedy scenes, for example; in a supermarket where there's a fight I could see the floor covered in anything and everything that's breakable. The lottery ticket could... read
  • A review of Omaha
    by hrickclark on 02/07/2005
    Omaha is a feel good story with some minor flaws. The worst is spelling and having so many words and sentences underlined with green and red lines. I got the feeling the script was not double checked as suggested by the instructions. The baseball game reads like a real game, however baseball is inheritly slow so the script needs to tighten it up a bit. I think the concept... read
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