An undercover cop with a violent past is recruited to infiltrate the Tampa Bay rave scene in the late 90s.
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A review of One Time Wonderby ItalianIce on 03/28/2011I usually dread reading something thats 120 pages and usually I wont but something drew me to this. So, hats off for a great synopsis. I enjoyed the intro even though I had my reservations because something about the "Talk show" aspect seemed familiar and lame (to be honest) but my opinion changed. Even though the heavy dialogue, with a TON of exposition, took over the... read
A review of Sweetheart of the Rodeoby ItalianIce on 02/16/2011REVIEW Sweetheart of the Rodeo AMY You’re so lame that when they look you up in a dictionary there’s a picture of you. Did you mean to say that when they look up “lame” they see a picture of her? An bomber – a bomber Pg22 lays should be lies I want to see the action formatted to show it as the scene is supposed to be. With jolting action. Your use of inserts are wrong. Okay…... read
A review of Out of the Badlands (3rd Draft)by ItalianIce on 02/14/2011One of the better westerns that ive read. It starts out with a bang (pun intended). I immediately liked Matthias and knew he was the lead. Also, I knew that Elizabeth and him were going to get together. I actually would’ve liked to see Matthias work a little harder to get her, rather than have her just fall into the tub with him. I really liked the brother against brother... read