jacquesst 

member since 06/12/2008 | last login 06/14/2012

I'm a born writer, living and working as a hard news reporter in South Africa, who studied film and screenwriting in England. My biggest problem is that I'm lazy and therefore I despise rewriting......

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I'm a born writer, living and working as a hard news reporter in South Africa, who studied film and screenwriting in England. My biggest problem is that I'm lazy and therefore I despise rewriting...

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Reviews by jacquesst 41

  • by jacquesst on 07/20/2010
    I enjoyed your story although it left me feeling somewhat sad. I enjoyed the tension between the protagonist and his wife and how the situation with the injured dog plays on their relationship and emotions. This piece is well written and I loved how you described the action taking place. I would recommend this story to anybody. Congratulations on a great short story. Hope to... read
  • A review of Body Parts
    by jacquesst on 08/19/2008
    Kevin I reckon they should create a new section where the person with the most short story uploads should be mentioned. That or I should get paid just to review your stories...Just kidding! Body Parts was very interesting. It was short and sweet. I would’ve preferred a longer story with more detail and descriptions. There is lots of room in this tale that can make for a better... read
  • A review of Bloodrain
    by jacquesst on 08/19/2008
    You have an interesting title and a very interesting story, but it was rushed and in need of some detailed planning. The structure needs a lot of work. The story feels too compressed, needs space to flourish and to steal away the reader's imagination. I would like to read this tale again if you can flesh out the story and rework the plot. Describe your protagonist and antagonist... read
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Comments About jacquesst 19

  • Paul Iacono on 07/26/2010

    Hi, thanks for your review of "Things We Pull From the Wreckage". Not sure why it's being put out for reviews, as I've not been active on TS for several months now, but your kind words are certainly appreciated.
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 09/27/2008

    Am still alive...

    *O_o*? Really?

    And am finally able to do some work...on your story...
    Expect something by next week...beginning of October...

    Hope yer dewing well!!!
  • Susan P. on 09/25/2008

    I am sure it will come up soon in my assignment list. Looking forward to it!
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