A man experiences life in a dark harsh world.
I'm a born writer, living and working as a hard news reporter in South Africa, who studied film and screenwriting in England. My biggest problem is that I'm lazy and therefore I despise rewriting......
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I'm a born writer, living and working as a hard news reporter in South Africa, who studied film and screenwriting in England. My biggest problem is that I'm lazy and therefore I despise rewriting...
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Reviews by jacquesst 41
A review of The Things We Pull From the Wreckageby jacquesst on 07/20/2010I enjoyed your story although it left me feeling somewhat sad. I enjoyed the tension between the protagonist and his wife and how the situation with the injured dog plays on their relationship and emotions. This piece is well written and I loved how you described the action taking place. I would recommend this story to anybody. Congratulations on a great short story. Hope to... read
A review of Body Partsby jacquesst on 08/19/2008Kevin I reckon they should create a new section where the person with the most short story uploads should be mentioned. That or I should get paid just to review your stories...Just kidding! Body Parts was very interesting. It was short and sweet. I wouldíve preferred a longer story with more detail and descriptions. There is lots of room in this tale that can make for a better... read
A review of Bloodrainby jacquesst on 08/19/2008You have an interesting title and a very interesting story, but it was rushed and in need of some detailed planning. The structure needs a lot of work. The story feels too compressed, needs space to flourish and to steal away the reader's imagination. I would like to read this tale again if you can flesh out the story and rework the plot. Describe your protagonist and antagonist... read