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  EvilSpeakers on 07/20/2010

  Hi, Thanks for adding Free Ted's Head to your favorites. A reviewer just pointed out several minor snafus that escaped my proofread. I'm deleting Free Ted's Head V.3 and will be uploading Free Ted's Head V.3.1 in a few days.
  
  Thanks again.
  
  Joe
  
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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/01/2009

  Congrats on making the semis in PAGE!
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  Keith McGregor on 07/09/2009

  Just went to Free Lance Magnum--got it as an assignment.
  Couldn't read the PDF, and I haven't had that problem before. I'm working with a PC using Vista. I've downloaded about 30 PDFs from this site over the last few months, and never had one come out like this. The script is there, but the letters are very light and, in places almost invisible. Don't know whether it's just my computer or a problem with the PDF--you may want to look at it.

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Comments About Jagehalperin 13

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  EvilSpeakers on 07/20/2010

  Hi, Thanks for adding Free Ted's Head to your favorites. A reviewer just pointed out several minor snafus that escaped my proofread. I'm deleting Free Ted's Head V.3 and will be uploading Free Ted's Head V.3.1 in a few days.
  
  Thanks again.
  
  Joe
  
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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/01/2009

  Congrats on making the semis in PAGE!
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  Keith McGregor on 07/09/2009

  Just went to Free Lance Magnum--got it as an assignment.
  Couldn't read the PDF, and I haven't had that problem before. I'm working with a PC using Vista. I've downloaded about 30 PDFs from this site over the last few months, and never had one come out like this. The script is there, but the letters are very light and, in places almost invisible. Don't know whether it's just my computer or a problem with the PDF--you may want to look at it.
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  moejoe_dreams on 05/04/2009

  This is late and a duplicated comment, but I just came to the conclusion that I never made it a habit to thank those who reviewed my script “Ben the Barbarian” so if I didn’t thank you before, here is a big thank you from me to you for the time you put into my script and review. Sorry so late… hopefully you like and agree with the phrase “better late then never.” Or better yet “stupid is what stupid does”
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  Ducey on 12/11/2008

  I'd like to see that copy of Butter.
  
  Could you send it to robducey@gmail.com
  
  Thanks
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  seniormike on 08/10/2008

  Hey thanks for your review of Face Your Fears. I'm glad you found it entertaining. It was definitely my goal to bring fear back to the "scary woods" genre. Thanks for your notes and comments as I will use them towards re-writes. Good luck with your script as well!
  
  -Mike
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  MikeyMook on 08/10/2008

  Thank you for your review of my Screenplay. I am Scottish and the script has always been close to my heart thematically. Your comments about it will certainly help with the next redraft.
  
  All the very best,
  
  Mikey
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  BrunoBros on 08/08/2008

  Thanks for your review. I really appreaciate you taking the time to read my script and also taking the time to offer valuable criticism. It will help me in my future efforts.
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  Brengunner on 07/16/2008

  Thanks for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.
  
  In many ways this is an experimental piece. And it's in the areas that I broke spec. standard rules that I hear the most criticisms here on Triggerstreet. I.e. the flashbacks, military jargon, and lack of life or death/extreme tension between Bao and Mark in America. Yet, all of these choices were made deliberately, so I'm not surprised by much of the feedback.
  
  I'm not a Vet., I spent almost two years on the research for this screenplay. Much of which was comprised of interviewing Vietnam veterans. Universally, the ones who read it and contributed their experience where extremely pleased at the inclusion of all the jargon and non-linear story-telling. Most expressed that their memories do not come in a linear stream, rather they are triggered by sights, sounds, smells and so on. Additionally, they dislike the majority of Hollywood films on Vietnam because they sacrificed details to reach a larger non-vet audience; in doing so they also sacrificed authenticity. (Imagine if Saving Private Ryan had removed all the historical/military detail?)
  
  Once again thanks for your time and effort. Glad to see your screenplay is moving up in ranking and obviously improving with each new draft.
  
  Cheers, m.
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  Brengunner on 07/07/2008

  So, hows the freewill's coming? You knock out Jeremy's yet?
  
  Cheers, Brengunner

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