In 2050 Tokyo, a mysterious American with a strange gift must venture into a life-like Dreamworld in search of... more
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Reviews by Jagehalperin 27
A review of Tough Timesby Jagehalperin on 07/09/2010The archetypes of the Demon and the Angel, tormented by boredom and impotence in the face of human nihilism, and finding ironic solace only in each other's company, make this one an authentic delight. There is nothing in here that is merely ornamental, and each sentence generally serves the telling. I enjoyed the conversations, especially the Demon's confounding attempt at... read
A review of WHISPERSby Jagehalperin on 01/09/2010Congrats on this subtle, well-shaded portrait of a story. As someone who suffers from mental illness, and who has spent brief snippets of my life in hospitals, this really grabbed my spirit. Fortunately for me, and kudos for it to you, you grabbed my spirit like a firm handshake, neither limp nor overwhelming. It was "just right." The rape was vicious and unexpected, and a... read
A review of Soul's Crossingby Jagehalperin on 01/09/2010First off, thank you dearly for a thoughtful, never sentimental portrayal of youth; at times virtuosic display of writing ability, and an overall delight of a read. Just a couple quick notes, and off you go! FIrst, and most glaringly, and thankfully easiest to fix -- get rid of the scene numbers. They have no place in a spec script, such as this. That is strictly the realm... read