javery56

A review of Heel Your Sole

by javery56 on 09/05/2006

this isnt going to be a very good review sorry, i didnt find the production techniques very good, the stop motion work was pretty good, i didnt even think the editing was that good. the shots were ok, i know its a comedy, but i didnt laugh. for a simple story like this i think the visuals have to be a lot more interesting. for an assistant editor im sure you can do a lot better... read

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A review of Don Quixote

by javery56 on 09/05/2006

i thought this short was ok, there wasnt really anything technically wrong with it. the editing, and shots were fine, but they wernt great. i didnt like the story, i just found it pointless without explanation. I think the strengths with this film was defenetly the sound mixing and the acting. so in my opinion the skills are their, but a better story next time, on the other... read

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A review of It's the Little Things in Life

by javery56 on 09/05/2006

nicely executed. Everything in this short was well done, nice editing, very nice moving shots. its a nice change to see these no budget shorts that actually have good production techniques, so well done on that. the acting was all good to, i liked that their was a large amount of locations. I thought 1 of the shots went on to long, when the guy was on the couch at the end... read

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A review of Color Me Blind

by javery56 on 07/15/2006

that was great, it reminded me of arrested development, and the office, which are my 2 favourite shows, so good job there. the acting was also good. i liked the hand held camera work, it really worked. it seemed well written, and the last line of the movie was perfect, a very funny way to end it. all the locations were good to. well done

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A review of Dance All Night

by javery56 on 07/15/2006

the film is well made, at the begining when she is dancing i noticed there were a lot of different shots, and i believe that its little things like that which set movies apart from each other, so what i am saying is, it looked like you no what you are doing, and i have found that that is not too common on this website. As for the story, i wasnt a big fan, but like you said... read

the baby

A review of The Baby

by javery56 on 04/30/2006

as far as the story goes, it isnt boring, which is always a good thing. from a filmmakers point of view it needs a bit of work. the major thing is lighting, even if you just buy some cheap lights at the hardware store, it will look much better. seeing as it was only the one location the film could of done with a few more different shots. also i was confused when the guy started... read

hand out

A review of Hand Out

by javery56 on 04/29/2006

ive seen a couple of your films, and like your other films i enjoyed this one. i like the idea of doing all voice overs. I read your production notes about maybe re-doing the boys voice over so he sounds more like a kid, i say dont bother, whats the point of doing a voice over if its going to sound the same as it would on camera. the boys voice works and you should keep it... read

pet valu

A review of Pet Valu

by javery56 on 04/29/2006

i read your production notes, and yes this wasnt bad for first timers, it was actually pretty good. the only real thing that was letting it down was acting, other then that it was a funny script, the location was real so you get points for that. and the camera work wasnt bad either, infact it was good for "first timers" the only thing i didnt like was that security camera shot,... read

the plumber

A review of The Plumber

by javery56 on 04/29/2006

That was realy good. the story was good, it had a nice twist, the dialouge was well written, and the actors where good. the shots were all excellent, and so was the sound and editing. i cant really give any advice, because that was an awsome film. it did get a bit boring at the start like you said in your notes, but it was all worth it, and it is one of the better produced... read

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A review of Oranges Ain't The Only Fruit

by javery56 on 09/23/2005

not bad, the worst thing about this movie, was some of the dialouge didnt seem to flow, and some of the editing could of been tighter. apart from that it was pretty good, and the ending was pretty funny. i also enjoted the outtakes. the acting was pretty good, only dialouge needs work, i liked all the shots, except at on stage there was a three way conversation and i couldnt... read

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