JC Mouse 

member since 06/17/2011 | last login 07/20/2011

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  • by JC Mouse on 07/20/2011
    A beautifully balanced story it found it's pitch early on and then settled there effortlessly. Personally I found the constant references to LA locations and land marks a little overwhelming, not being from the town they meant very little to me and thought the descriptions of where they where heading driving were of course necessary the level of detail seemed excessive. I was... read

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