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I liked this shortfilm. Especially since it was part of a 48 hours assignment. The script worked for me. The casting was good. I thought the actors did a good job. The camera and lighting was fine. Sound was also good. The film moved along nicely and held my attention. Good job!
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What a great location. The boy did a great job. He was very natural in his acting. The sound was good along with the camera work. The editing worked well and kept the pacing flowing nicely. I felt the story was somewhat weak. But I did like the idea of the treasure being the cinema. Good luck in the festival.
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I thought you did a good job with the set decoration and all the props etc. Very realistic. The voice over was done very well. The camera work was interesting along with the editing. The story to me was nothing really new. Especially since I have seen this many times with all the CSI TV shows and crime dramas. Good luck in the festival!
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I thought this was very creative and I enjoyed it. The music set the mood nicely. Actors did a good job. I thought the camera and lighting worked along with the editing. The thing I feel could have been done better, is a few more frames of the photos that influenced the man to shoot I believe was his friend. Good luck in the festival!
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i enjoyed the acting a felt the actors did a great job. The use of location and premise of the film worked very well to create this very suspenseful short. Photography worked although sometimes the lighting seemed to be inconsistent when cutting back and forth between long shot of road and interior of car. I was also confused by the ending.
Good luck in the festival.
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I liked the use of the different effects. I liked the music which really helped to set the mood. The fight choreography was cool. The editing set a good pace. But I felt the script and story was lacking. Not sure what was going on. Good luck in the festival.
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The best thing about this short was the story. A very interesting premise. I found this film to be thought provoking. We sometimes take our senses for granted. The narration worked. Photography was simple and served the story. The editing and use of no sound worked. The acting was truthful. Good job and good luck in the festival.
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I liked the films score. It really set the mood and added to the films suspense. I though the camera shots worked. The sound and lighting also worked. The hand actor did is job well. The special effects for the severed finger also worked.
I feel you guys accomplished your exercise nicely. Job well done.
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I liked this and thought is was very well done. Great looking animation. The sound was good. Nice and clear. Cool and fun sound effects. The voices were done well. The script was well written and made me laugh. Very good job. I looking forward to viewing more of your work.
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I liked the overall theme and story. But these are the things that took me out of the story. The wife did not appear sick enough in then suddenly dies. The car scene was not clear. And not realistic. It did not appear to me that the women driving actually hit anything. No noise, thud, screech etc. Very anti-climatic Did he push daughter out of the way? Yes, I guess but not...
I liked the overall theme and story. But these are the things that took me out of the story. The wife did not appear sick enough in then suddenly dies. The car scene was not clear. And not realistic. It did not appear to me that the women driving actually hit anything. No noise, thud, screech etc. Very anti-climatic Did he push daughter out of the way? Yes, I guess but not clear. Also another thing bothered me, was how he ignored his daughter. I realize it was a 24 hour deal. I also liked the music and the actors. Good luck in your future projects.
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Thanks for the review. I see on your profile that you have quite a bit of experience in the film&TV field, so your review was very appreciated. That short was just something of an experiment like you said; it was shot in one night, minimal takes, etc. I was wondering if you could review my other short on this website (summer lovin'). It has more of a developed story, characterization, etc and I would be grateful if you could provide your input on it. Thanks again for the review
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Thanks for your review of The Baseball!
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Thanks for your feedback.
+ more commentssinhat on 08/02/2009
Hall E Woode on 09/26/2008
MikeyMook on 08/02/2008
It couldn't really have been filmed with two opposing styles, because that would've killed the idea of it being filmed in real time by the players. The anti-climacting ending was a style choice because I wanted the viewer to think more about the difference in cultures rather than the on-screen violence.
Sorry it didn't appeal to you.
Mikey