a short story
by JEA83
A group of bank robbers plan on taking a peaceful town for everything. But the bank robbers' leader has to deal... more
JEA83
member since 12/16/2002 |
last login 08/04/2012
Just delving into my writing more and more. I know there is a NY Times bestseller up my sleeve...somewhere...
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Just delving into my writing more and more. I know there is a NY Times bestseller up my sleeve...somewhere
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Reviews by JEA83 11
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A review of Christmas Shoppingby JEA83 on 02/13/2009I think christmas has been ruined for me. Ha ha. It was well written, but I see Santa as being more of a pedophile than a homosexual. If I ever have kids, I will just tell them there is no such thing as Santa. I wouldn't consider there to be character development, but rather character deconstruction, which I actually thought was a pretty brilliant idea. I would say that was... read -
A review of Forward: Divinity in a Donutby JEA83 on 10/08/2007haha. wow, what an interesting subject matter. at first i thought u had completely lost your mind, but then when you start pointing out the other religious forms in different things, like jelly donuts or potato chips, it does make sense. i don't neccessarily see it being a book, but who knows. what i do like is that you stayed focused with the story and subject matter and... read
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A review of What Happened On the Planet Pergby JEA83 on 10/07/2007honestly, i'm not the smartest man in the world, but i find stories less enjoyable when i need a dictionary by me all the time to figure out what is being written. that aside, i do like the overall concept, but the story did bounce around a lot with nothing to really move it forward. i think there is promise in this story though, because it kinda struck me as a dr. suess... read
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kkatherine on 02/14/2009