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  • by jeff2680 on 10/05/2011
    Let me preface this by apologizing for taking so long to review this. And also to thank Matt for letting me participate in this. I did find this a bit awkward to review since I was involved in it and because I haven't being do much of anything in the writing and reviewer department of late. Air Defiantly could see this playing in my head as I read it. You crafted a solid... read
  • by jeff2680 on 12/04/2010
    Youíve got a good premise here. You won me over with Screaming Eagles intro and I looked forward to the rest of the story. Nice hook. But I did have trouble with your script. I found it a difficult read. Iíll admit this may be on me as Iím what I call I frustrated reader. My chief complaint I have is that I found the story very confusing in places. I didnít read this all in... read
  • A review of Aquarianna (v2)
    by jeff2680 on 11/18/2010
    This is a tough one for me. I like the idea but I had trouble immersing myself in the story. Iíll admit this may be totally on me and my expectations so take this review with a proverbial grain of salt. The trouble I had was that the opening (which is great by the way) had me expecting a love story. Then it morphed into a revenge story that I didnít feel had much weight to... read
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  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 04/05/2011

    Earlier in the thread it was suggested that somebody worse than Hitler could have existed had Hitler himself not. As crazy as it seems the allies had the same idea for the last couple of years of the war. My uncle, a spy, had several opportunities to kill him but by that point they were happy with his poor tactical decision making. They even went as far as to inform him of plots against him.
  • heat_wave187 on 03/12/2011

    just thought you'd like to know that you made my sister-in-law's day... almost brough her to tears... "uncle" frank was THE single most popular prof at UCSB for many years...


    if you look at my avatar, you'll see uncle frank as a robot in the corner...
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 03/08/2011

    thanks for the thorough and awesome review of Cherokee. You raise some great points. I appreciate it a lot. Thanks again.

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