A hard edge Detective gets a little help with his life from a man he belives to be crazy.
Stopped interacting with my creative side far too long due to personal events in my life. Trying to claw my way up from the bottom of a well and get back to what I enjoy... Before my head explodes. Do you know...
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Stopped interacting with my creative side far too long due to personal events in my life. Trying to claw my way up from the bottom of a well and get back to what I enjoy... Before my head explodes. Do you know how messy that would be?
Reviews by jeffwinterton98 25
A review of Games of Immortal Men Second Editionby jeffwinterton98 on 08/01/2009An easy story to follow. The words the writer has chosen rolls off the mind like a new sled in winter. I could easily envision Captain Seither, as he readied himself for battle. His speech sounding true to the time. There are a few instances where the words and speech escape the story. If not only to add a block between passages. " His head slammed off some rocks."... read
A review of Silent Sighby jeffwinterton98 on 07/31/2009The story was well written. Well versed. I could imagine myself standing next to the man in the fields. Next to the woman in the apartment. Just one thing, Who are these people? What did they look like? What are their names, I kept asking the page. The names need to come quick. A name, no matter what it is, conveys a vision in the readers mind. I was stuck on this. Hoping... read
A review of Self-Murder Attemptby jeffwinterton98 on 07/31/2009I'm almost afraid to write this review. Afraid it might damage the writer further or the character. It reads as if it is an entry in a diary. There is not much structure. Or dialogue to be stated with in. I did feel a touch of sympathy for the writer. Not much for the characters. it seemed rushed. Like the writer had another pill to take. Or another glass of wine to down... read