jeffwinterton98 

member since 05/17/2008 | last login 03/30/2014

Stopped interacting with my creative side far too long due to personal events in my life. Trying to claw my way up from the bottom of a well and get back to what I enjoy... Before my head explodes. Do you know...

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Stopped interacting with my creative side far too long due to personal events in my life. Trying to claw my way up from the bottom of a well and get back to what I enjoy... Before my head explodes. Do you know how messy that would be?

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Reviews by jeffwinterton98 25

  • by jeffwinterton98 on 08/01/2009
    An easy story to follow. The words the writer has chosen rolls off the mind like a new sled in winter. I could easily envision Captain Seither, as he readied himself for battle. His speech sounding true to the time. There are a few instances where the words and speech escape the story. If not only to add a block between passages. " His head slammed off some rocks."... read
  • A review of Silent Sigh
    by jeffwinterton98 on 07/31/2009
    The story was well written. Well versed. I could imagine myself standing next to the man in the fields. Next to the woman in the apartment. Just one thing, Who are these people? What did they look like? What are their names, I kept asking the page. The names need to come quick. A name, no matter what it is, conveys a vision in the readers mind. I was stuck on this. Hoping... read
  • A review of Self-Murder Attempt
    by jeffwinterton98 on 07/31/2009
    I'm almost afraid to write this review. Afraid it might damage the writer further or the character. It reads as if it is an entry in a diary. There is not much structure. Or dialogue to be stated with in. I did feel a touch of sympathy for the writer. Not much for the characters. it seemed rushed. Like the writer had another pill to take. Or another glass of wine to down... read
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Comments About jeffwinterton98 20

  • Leemanchee on 08/03/2009

    Hi

    Thanks for the great review of 'Daydreamer'.


    The naming of the main character was something I toyed with. I am currently re-writing it, he has a name now.

    Glad you enjoyed it.
  • lizzayn on 08/01/2009

    Thanks for the review!
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/30/2009

    I appreciate your review, your kind remarks, and critical analysis. Take care. Tom
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