jehall 

member since 08/18/2003 | last login 03/04/2012

From Burlington, Ontario (near Toronto). I just graduated the University of Guelph with a bachelor of arts. I aspire to become a screenwriter one day....

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From Burlington, Ontario (near Toronto). I just graduated the University of Guelph with a bachelor of arts. I aspire to become a screenwriter one day.

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Reviews by jehall 53

  • A review of Pieces
    by jehall on 12/23/2007
    This was a great concept for a short and the music was top-notch for building the tension, although, the sounds seemed to be too loud in places. Despite all this, I feel like there should've been more. The whole doesn't equal the sum of the parts in this case as the cinematography is great. I think you have a creepy idea, but can take it a lot further.
  • A review of Blood & Dust
    by jehall on 12/23/2007
    The concept of vampires in a western almost makes me drool with anticipation. I love the two genres and for them to be combined is something I donít think Iíve ever seen, and I was right along with you for most of the way. The problem is once we get to the mythology part where Lauren and Wil learn Cayatteís backstory Ė which goes on far too long Ė the story kind of comes to... read
  • by jehall on 12/13/2007
    This was a difficult script to read and, thus, a little difficult to critique. I suspect due to the story of the script, and the grammar mistakes made throughout the sp, that English is not the first language of the author. As a result, the sp is rather disjointed; many small scenes donít really flow together; action paragraphs didnít leave me with a clear picture of what... read
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