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WOW! That is such a tiny picture. I did like the story idea and the little bit of action, but it was very hard to see what was actually going on and also hard to hear the dialogue.
Overall for a first time film short it wasn't bad at all.
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The synopsis states "two kids go on their last adventure and discover the imaginable...really? I didn't see and adventure. What I saw was two kids in a barn doing what kids do, get into things, which is not an adventure.
Making the rug part of the story was interesting but it didn't do much for the story.
The story was boring and not very interesting.
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Technically the shots are very clear and concise. I really like that about this short.
I understand wanting to find love and about his lonliness but I don't see how the butterfly theory works here.
I'm not sure if he has a look of intense sadness or if he looks confused. When he is walking through the people he is looking at all the women and he looks really creepy almost...
Technically the shots are very clear and concise. I really like that about this short.
I understand wanting to find love and about his lonliness but I don't see how the butterfly theory works here.
I'm not sure if he has a look of intense sadness or if he looks confused. When he is walking through the people he is looking at all the women and he looks really creepy almost like he is stalking his prey. At the bus stop when he is staring at the woman he still looks creepy. He stands there staring at her dreaming and then he walks away. I don't see how he is going to find love.
I liked the part of him sitting on the park bench from day to night and looking at all the people around him. That part I understand and I feel is crucial to the story.
The characters facial expressions are too intense and I don't think it is warranted for this.
But overall I do like the way it was shot and the idea of being so lonely and wanting to be loved that you would do anything to try and find it.
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This story started out really well I thought. A story about someone evil roaming the earth to satisfy their bloodlust was an interesting story. I think the film would have been alot more scarier if it had been filmed at night, so that Concolm could terrorize the two and not be seen. For Concolm to just walk up on the two in daylight was corny and so was the lame fight scene...
This story started out really well I thought. A story about someone evil roaming the earth to satisfy their bloodlust was an interesting story. I think the film would have been alot more scarier if it had been filmed at night, so that Concolm could terrorize the two and not be seen. For Concolm to just walk up on the two in daylight was corny and so was the lame fight scene. The film was good up to that point.
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I thought the concept and flow of the film was really good. To me it showed the desperation that person faced with the decision to end their life and the pain that they were suffering to arrive at that decision. The ending was a real surprise. How pathetic it would seem to try and commit suicide only to wake up three days later. Maybe this is her hell.
