jiggson 

member since 07/24/2003 | last login 03/26/2014

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Reviews by jiggson 64

  • A review of Love Hack's Revenge
    by jiggson on 04/11/2013
    This was a well written screenplay with few typos or formatting errors. The characters all had clear voices and I could easily follow the plot and story. The one element of the structure that could use some work is the use of Voice Over. Voice Over is a difficult thing to pull off successfully and it does not work in this script. The short segment at the beginning between... read
  • by jiggson on 04/02/2013
    School for the Blind was well written and clear. The formatting was correct for the most part. There were a couple of places where dialogue was in the Action section and vice versa. These are easily correctable. The characters had different personalities and voices and the screenplay was an easy read. I did have a hard time telling if this was meant to be a comedy or a... read
  • A review of The Girl of Givet
    by jiggson on 04/04/2011
    The Girl of Givet was an easy enough read and the time period, though used often, still has plenty of potential for compelling stories.  I did feel that it should have focused more on Adeline and her story, given the title. This is a hard screenplay for me to review for some reason, so I am just going to list out some of the areas I felt could use some improvement. Opening... read
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Comments About jiggson 2

  • Brandon Taber on 10/04/2009

    Guess you have to change the name of your Zombieland script now, huh?
  • Paul Iacono on 04/14/2008

    Hey, thanks for your comments on "Strange Days". Funny thing -- I just uploaded a revised version last night, and I saw your review this morning and thought "Wow, that was fast!" lol. Then I realized you reviewed the old version, of course.

    To be honest, I've never seen any of Rob Zombie's work, so maybe I'll check some out. (On the other hand, you couldn't pay me to watch the "Saw" series or "Hostel" .) I was going for more of a David Lynch kind of feel.

    (And FYI, I'm aware of the difficulty I'll have selling a screenplay in which one lead gets ass raped and the other gets shot in the face. I can just see actors scrambling to take either role lol. So this has been more of an educational exercise for me, really.)

    Again -- thanks so much for your comments!

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