jjs2028 

member since 10/08/2008 | last login 11/28/2011

My name is Jeffrey Santo, I'm 26 years old and have always loved to write. I completed three feature film screenplays in the dark comedy/horror genres. I have written, directed, and produced two horror shorts. I have also written and directed various...

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My name is Jeffrey Santo, I'm 26 years old and have always loved to write. I completed three feature film screenplays in the dark comedy/horror genres. I have written, directed, and produced two horror shorts. I have also written and directed various comedy shorts for Lehigh University's television show. I attended Lehigh University and received a BA in design arts and a minor in creative writing and recently attained a Master's degree.

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Reviews by jjs2028 21

  • A review of Rocket '78
    by jjs2028 on 08/09/2011
    Rocket ’78 Review Nice job with this script. Definitely one of the better scripts on triggerstreet! I've written down notes as I read and then ended with some final thoughts on the story. Here it all is: p.2 - EXT. JOHN'S POV -- THE TOWN OF PIRTLESVILLE -- DAY John sees Don’t need to say “John sees” we are already at his POV, just tell us what he’s looking at. p. 4 – No... read
  • A review of Silver Moon (V.3)
    by jjs2028 on 10/11/2009
    As I read and review screenplays, I like to write what I’m thinking and what I find right away so I’ll just write all the notes as I go through and then have some thoughts at the end: At page 5, I’m already into this. I am a huge fan on the horror/slasher genre. I love low-budget horror and this starts out just like some of my favorites. I’m excited to keep moving on! p... read
  • A review of Cubo
    by jjs2028 on 09/29/2009
    In the beginning, I was planning on watching a short film that was horrifying in that it would show gross and freaky images. I am glad that this short did not do such a thing. Halfway through the film I was searching for a meaning and what it was all about, but rather I found myself feeling emotions and getting angry or upset, and then feeling eleviated of this stress during... read
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Comments About jjs2028 11

  • Lydia Mulvey on 08/10/2011

    Hey jjs2028

    Many thanks for the in-depth and comprehensive review.

    This was actually the first feature script that I wrote. It's about eight years old now.

    That said, your pointers were very helpful and have given me a lot to think about.

    Just one thing, I don't know why the dialogue blocks are so wide. I didn't think they were as I used Final Draft version 7 to write the latest draft. I'll have another look at that and see.

    Cheers,
    Lydia
  • Russ2007 on 10/21/2009

    Sorry, just noticed I never said thanks for the review of SERIAL KILLERS.

    Thanks for the feedback.

    Greatly appreciated.
  • _loki_ on 10/09/2009

    Hi there, thanks for taking the time to review 'Bulletproof'. I'll be taking all your points into account when writing the next draft.

    In regards to the unanswerable question, I realized as soon as I'd submitted it but unfortunately they don't let you edit the quiz once submitted.
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