johnftaylor 

member since 11/18/2002 | last login 10/22/2004

Real Estate Agent. Ten years as a writer, two published novels, one unpublished novel, completed seven screenplays and producer/writer of one unsold Television pilot. Owner of WLA Publishing....

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Real Estate Agent. Ten years as a writer, two published novels, one unpublished novel, completed seven screenplays and producer/writer of one unsold Television pilot. Owner of WLA Publishing.

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Reviews by johnftaylor 6

  • A review of CLOSURE
    by johnftaylor on 12/03/2002
    This is a film I want to see. It is a unique concept that should interest producers. The characters develop to levels that surprise the reader. The unusual twist at the end, I will not disclose, but enjoyed thoroulghly. The dialogue is crisp. Every scene develops the story and moves it toward the unique conclusion. Good job, good Closure!
  • A review of PERFECT
    by johnftaylor on 11/21/2002
    I have very few suggestions for this screenplay. It was a quick read, the only problem I had was with all the caps and camera angles in the description. This really distracts the reader in what is otherwise a quick moving story. I would recommend using caps only if introducting a character for the first time or if it is a special effect, such as sound, action, or prop.... read
  • by johnftaylor on 11/19/2002
    This is an interesting concept. But, it reads like a soap opera. The dialogue is so on the mark and we are asked to listen to actors talk about what has happened. Let's see it, this is supposed to be a film. It would be a director's nightmare, trying to get actors to complete lines for pages. And when some action does occur it sounds like it has been taken from a novel... read
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