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A review of Losing Simon

by jond76 on 10/25/2005

Well, this was an enjoyable short. The only problem I had with it was: I had no idea who Simon was to these people. Maybe I missed it, but a touch more info would have probably worked. Technically, this was well done. Shots were nicely framed and the editing was sharp. Some of you outside shots might have benefited for some contrast tweaking, as some of it was a touch washed... read

Nice look

A review of A Fishy Dilemma

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

Interesting look you were going for. Good job on the sound; it fit very nice without sounding like it was put in in post. The music was fitting for the look of the film. Nice stunt fish, too. All in all a light short with and appropriate running time made this a nice watch. Good luck.

pretty good writing..

A review of Cliche Man

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

...but that will only go so far before one starts to notice the poor camera work. Overall this was pretty enjoyable. So I guess that all the bar patrons were his imaginary friends. Kind of a sad guy. Tighten up the camera work(ie: think about your shots before hand) and you'll improve this by alot. The guy playing Cliche Man was quite good. Good Luck

nice drop

A review of There in Paradise

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

A little long for a commercial, but the guy did the drop perfectly.. Nice location. You might have gone with starting with a close-up then zooming out; as opposed to zooming in then out. Anyway, pretty funny. Nice touch with him trying to scoop up the beer water.

Funny..

A review of We Want You

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

I liked the FBI warning. The concept was funny BUT.....the sound was awful. I could barely understand what the alien on the right was saying. That took alot away from the enjoyment of this short. Your puppets and sets are good, though. Try dubbing the dialouge in next time. Good luck.

Pretty good..

A review of MANOLITO

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

But not without some constructive critisim... but first, what worked. The costumes were good, nice and authentic. The actors seemed very into their roles and performed well. Good locations Good music Some critiques The opening shot was a bit uninspired, I thought as I was watching it of two other angles that would have been more interesting. Some of the times it seemed that... read

Upload it when its done...

A review of Siren: Episode 4

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

This would be much better if it was finished. You have an attractive female lead, some decent fight choreography, and what looks to be a decent camera. What you also have is an out of context fight scene. If this is part of a serial like you said, then you should wait and edit them all together to get us what would probably be an entertaining short. Most of your shots were... read

well, I dunno...

A review of All the Real George Washingtons

by jond76 on 10/23/2005

I'm not sure what to make of this really. It was like a less insightful Forest Gump. There were a couple of things that made me chuckle, but end the end there didn't seem to be much story. I'll hit some points now: Shots were well placed, but nothing ground-breaking. Sound was good, VO work was well done. The actors were fine and did a good job. I thought the running time... read

I'm sure I've reviewed this before...

A review of Bubba's Chili Parlor

by jond76 on 09/29/2005

..well here is another review. I love zombie movies. I have one planned myself. I have to admit that mine deals with Mad Cow as well. Hmm, small world. Anyway on to your short. This was well shot and I liked the look of the movie. Your girl had a real intensity to her. Tell her "good job". Editing was good. Sound. Some of the dialouge was muffled but that might be due to compression... read

well shot..

A review of In A Bathroom

by jond76 on 09/29/2005

I liked the look of this short, it was nicely shot. Sound was ok, but the fart noises were the loudest thing. Could have upped the musics volume a notch. Shots were well composed, I liked the mirror stuff especially. Actors did fine and were well cast. I have to say, the kid dancing at the urinal was one of the most strange and unsettling things I've seen in awhile. No idea... read

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